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Jeevimathi

Active member
அருமையான பதிவு....என்னாது 7 பதிவுல கதை முடிய pogutha????? Athukkulavaa ஸ்டோரி முடிய போகுது...என்ன சிஸ்டர் இப்படி டகுனு சொல்லுறீங்க....இதில்லம் நல்லாவே இல்லை சிஸ்டர்...
 

Meenalochini

Well-known member
மிளிரு பாப்பா,
அபயன் ஆடு அதுவா மாலையை
கழுத்தில் மாட்டிட்டு,
மஞ்ச தண்ணியை மேல ஊத்திக்கிட்டு,
அருவாளை உன் கையில் கொடுத்து,
வெட்டு, வெட்டுன்னு சொன்னா,
நீயும் என்ன செய்வ?
அதான் ஒரே போடா போட்டுட்ட.

ஆடு பாவம் மிளிர். ஆடு கூட சேர்ந்து நீயும் ஆடுடா
நாங்க எல்லாரும் பாடுறோம்.

அபயன் ஆர்மி, அபயன் ஸ்லீப்பர் செல் எல்லாரும் வாங்க.....
பாட்டு பாடலாம்.
லா லே லா ல லா லா....
ஆ........ஆ.......
 
இரண்டு பேருமே பாவம் தான்.காலம் தான் பதில் சொல்லனும்.மாற்றம் ஒன்றுதான் மாற்றமில்லாதது காத்திருப்போம்
 

Storyreader

Well-known member
Nayani Ma'am - Today's breakfast tasted bitter. Anyhow we have to eat bitter gourd . At least at a lesser frequency. Both Abhayan and Milir had to face each other's wrath one day. Appidi thaan irundhuchu inniki update padichadhum.
But it's not fair on Abhayan's part to snatch her thaali. Adhu podravarai dhaan avanoodhadhu. Adhukku adhutha second andha thaali Mela full urimai avalukku thaan. Of course the way Milir rejected was too harsh. But her refusal to wear that jewellery is not incorrect. She preserves thaali as her symbol of love. The love she has for the Abhayan whom she met in the theatre. She couldn't and she doesn't want to erase the love she has for her husband - the image of Abhayan that she drew at her first sight. That's the reason behind giving birth to children admist all insults. Otherwise she would have aborted them. Abhayan who questions about the thaali, why didn't he question her about that.

Aval asingama nenaichu thaalium kazhatala, pillangalai-yum azhikalai. That's because she has more rights over them - both thaali and children as they are the symbol of her true love. The love that has ruled her heart above all the pain she has faced.

Aval chain vaangikita avana madhikaama Avan vasadhiya madhikira maadhiri dhaane aagum.
Aanalum Abhayanukku romba thaan peraasai.

Abhayan ! Mudhalla unnoda kaiya aval kazhuthula aasaiya poda vidatum appuram jewellery pathi yossikave vendam. Mannikirathuku time limit nee fix pannakoodhadhu paa. Eppa andha varam kedaikumnu kaalavarai illama wait Panna kathuko. Appidi dhaane dialogue pesina avalkitta. Nee dhaane sonna un kutratha mannikaradhu kashtam-nu. So just wait. You will win her heart just by being. As of now unnoda (Love and Brawn) podhum. Milir adhule mayangi unkita vandhuruva. Brain - a use pannadha.

Milir ! Unkita irrukura ore weapon unnoda tongue. Parthu carefully use pannuma. Illana adhu unnaiye kizhichudum. Un parvayil neeye tharamiranguvai.
As early as possible avanukku sorry sollidu. Sollanum aanal solladha.madhiri irukanum appidi edhavadhu tricky-aa yosichu Abhayan-ai un pakkam thirupu paarpom.
 
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Shalini M

Bronze Winner
Nayani Ma'am - Today's breakfast tasted bitter. Anyhow we have to eat bitter gourd . At least at a lesser frequency. Both Abhayan and Milir had to face each other's wrath one day. Appidi thaan irundhuchu inniki update padichadhum.
But it's not fair on Abhayan's part to snatch her thaali. Adhu podravarai dhaan avanoodhadhu. Adhukku adhutha second andha thaali Mela full urimai avalukku thaan. Of course the way Milir rejected was too harsh. But her refusal to wear that jewellery is not incorrect. She preserves thaali as her symbol of love. The love she has for the Abhayan whom she met in the theatre. She couldn't and she doesn't want to erase the love she has for her husband - the image of Abhayan that she drew at her first sight. That's the reason behind giving birth to children admist all insults. Otherwise she would have aborted them. Abhayan who questions about the thaali, why didn't he question her about that.

Aval asingama nenaichu thaalium kazhatala, pillangalai-yum azhikalai. That's because she has more rights over them - both thaali and children as they are the symbol of her true love. The love that has ruled her heart above all the pain she has faced.

Aval chain vaangikita avana madhikaama Avan vasadhiya madhikira maadhiri dhaane aagum.
Aanalum Abhayanukku romba thaan peraasai.

Abhayan ! Mudhalla unnoda kaiya aval kazhuthula aasaiya poda vidatum appuram jewellery pathi yossikave vendam. Mannikirathuku time limit nee fix pannakoodhadhu paa. Eppa andha varam kedaikumnu kaalavarai illama wait Panna kathuko. Appidi dhaane dialogue pesina avalkitta. Nee dhaane sonna in kutratha mannikaradhu kashtam-nu. So just wait. You will win her heart just by being. As of now unnoda (Love and Brawn) podhum. Milir adhule mayangi unkita vandhuruva. Brain - a use pannadha.

Milir ! Unkita irrukura ore weapon unnoda tongue. Parthu carefully use pannuma. Illana adhu unnaiye kizhichudum. Un parvayil neeye tharamiranguvai.
As early as possible avanukku sorry sollidu. Sollanum aanal solladha.madhiri irukanum appidi edhavadhu tricky-aa yosichu Abhayan-ai in pakkam thirupu paarpom.
Wow semma super sis😘😘😘
Amazing comments sis...
 

PriyaPraveen

Bronze Winner
rendu ud happpya irunthanaga athu porukkama ipdi rendu perum vevveru mana nilaikku kondu poittinglea....
Abay ne Milira sight adichathoda niruthi iruntha ivlo kasappukal vanthurukkathu avala pathi theirjum ne panni paru enanchunnu....
Milir unnodathu vaya illa visama ammadi epdi amilama kotra....pavam Abay Gandhiamthi epdi thudippanga yosikka mattiya....unnoda valiya mattum pakkara un munndai nikkara rendu perum vali anupavichanga,Abay ippavum unnoda varthai kettu thalai kunichu nikkaran eppatha puriyum unakku....
romab romba feeling bad Abay pavam......
 
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