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பானு ஸ்வராவின் "ஆதியின் நிலா" - கருத்துத் திரி
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Banu Swara
எஸ்எம்எஸ் குழுமம் எழுத்தாளர்
Hehehesissy ... Avlo mariyathayalam koopda koodathu , apram one month ku briyani kidaikama poida pothu pathukonga
.... Apram unga istam... Story nala irku but ud konjam weekly 3 days mathri kuduklame
. The way u narrate the story is too good , step by step ah suspense vachu... flow romba nala irku... Heroine ah pakrapo ore feeling than inum evlo years ku girls ipdye innocent ah irnthu hurt agi then maruvanga ... Unga joint family concept romba nala irku....
next time no bad words okay ah baby ma ...
Thank u soooo much sis
Namma imbuttu mariyathaiya kooptathuke intha pulla ipdi solluthe... nalla vela... naa innum konjam mariyatha serthu koopdalam nu irunthen... vayasanavanga, heart patient iruppangale nu tha kammi pannikitten
biryani thane naangalum supply panrom... ungalukkum venumna sollunga kaalam poora saapdalam.... enna Aadhi ku kolgai paraplu seyalalara iyanga vendi varum... ok na sollunga dear agreement la sign a potu enga sangathula serthukkirom...
Dharunkanika
Bronze Winner
Nice ud....last ud ku enaku manasula oru doubt vanthuchu (about nirmaladevi's carelessness towards nithila) apadiye adutha paragraph la enaku ans potuteenga enaku surprise ah agiduchu.. becoz oru vayasu ponnu enga poguthunu akkarai illama enna periyavanga apadinu thonuchu....
Ipa irukara most of the teenage girls like nithila pinjiley pazhuthuranga pazhuka vendiya time la adi pattu veenagidranga....
Showriya kodutha phone ah azhaga udachita avaney new phone vangi thandhutan...
Avan kochikita ivaluku enna vanthuchu yethuku ipadi udamba keduthukitu koodave character um spoil panikira...
Mithra ku nithila ku phone vangi kodutha news keturukum thane athanala yethanachum agumo
Nite avan kuda thaniya pogura alavuku vanthuta ithu enga poi mudiya pogutho....
Oru chinna doubt story orey track la pogura mathiri irukey what about arjun and meera's plot ..
Ipa irukara most of the teenage girls like nithila pinjiley pazhuthuranga pazhuka vendiya time la adi pattu veenagidranga....
Showriya kodutha phone ah azhaga udachita avaney new phone vangi thandhutan...
Avan kochikita ivaluku enna vanthuchu yethuku ipadi udamba keduthukitu koodave character um spoil panikira...
Mithra ku nithila ku phone vangi kodutha news keturukum thane athanala yethanachum agumo
Nite avan kuda thaniya pogura alavuku vanthuta ithu enga poi mudiya pogutho....
Oru chinna doubt story orey track la pogura mathiri irukey what about arjun and meera's plot ..
Banu Swara
எஸ்எம்எஸ் குழுமம் எழுத்தாளர்
Banu Swara
எஸ்எம்எஸ் குழுமம் எழுத்தாளர்
Banu Swara
எஸ்எம்எஸ் குழுமம் எழுத்தாளர்
Enna pannuvan nu nenga ninaikuringa sis...??? Nila pavam than
love kannai maraiikuthu 
Banu Swara
எஸ்எம்எஸ் குழுமம் எழுத்தாளர்
Payappadathinga sis... enna than irunthalum avan namma hero
appudillam eduthappula thappa ninaichida koodathu ungala naan nethaikke Aadhi sangathula serthukitten... so inimel Aadhi nallavar, vallavar nu nengale ellarukkum eduthu sollanum dear 
Banu Swara
எஸ்எம்எஸ் குழுமம் எழுத்தாளர்
Nice ud....last ud ku enaku manasula oru doubt vanthuchu (about nirmaladevi's carelessness towards nithila) apadiye adutha paragraph la enaku ans potuteenga enaku surprise ah agiduchu.. becoz oru vayasu ponnu enga poguthunu akkarai illama enna periyavanga apadinu thonuchu....
Ipa irukara most of the teenage girls like nithila pinjiley pazhuthuranga pazhuka vendiya time la adi pattu veenagidranga....
Showriya kodutha phone ah azhaga udachita avaney new phone vangi thandhutan...
Avan kochikita ivaluku enna vanthuchu yethuku ipadi udamba keduthukitu koodave character um spoil panikira...
Mithra ku nithila ku phone vangi kodutha news keturukum thane athanala yethanachum agumo
Nite avan kuda thaniya pogura alavuku vanthuta ithu enga poi mudiya pogutho....
Oru chinna doubt story orey track la pogura mathiri irukey what about arjun and meera's plot ..
Thank u soooo much kanika sis
Namma veetu paiyan... athuvum mariyathaikuriya Aadhi avargal nu nambi anupi irukanga... avangalukku enna theriyum Ivan oru onnam number fraud nu
Athu ennamo unmai than sis... puthi irukka ponnungale intha madiri maatikirappo namma chella kutty (puthi vere kammi
) appavi vere... enna aahumo...Oruvela Shourya kodutha phone pazhasu nu ninaichi odachirupano....
irunthalum irukum... Mithra ku ketuduchi... kandippa etho aahum tha... but yaruku aahum nu than therilla...
Meera Arjun inga oorukai, appalam than sis... theva padurappo thottukkalam
Aama... athellam irukatum nan nethu Aadhi sangathula nenga milk kudichittu ukarnthu irunthatha paarthane.... athukkulla katchi maritingala
Dharunkanika
Bronze Winner
Aathi siyarathu thappa therinjalum ava seyaluku pinnadi oru reason irukunu tha en manasuku thonuthu...Thank u soooo much kanika sis
Namma veetu paiyan... athuvum mariyathaikuriya Aadhi avargal nu nambi anupi irukanga... avangalukku enna theriyum Ivan oru onnam number fraud nu
Athu ennamo unmai than sis... puthi irukka ponnungale intha madiri maatikirappo namma chella kutty (puthi vere kammi
Oruvela Shourya kodutha phone pazhasu nu ninaichi odachirupano....
Mithra ku ketuduchi... kandippa etho aahum tha... but yaruku aahum nu than therilla...
Meera Arjun inga oorukai, appalam than sis... theva padurappo thottukkalam
Aama... athellam irukatum nan nethu Aadhi sangathula nenga milk kudichittu ukarnthu irunthatha paarthane.... athukkulla katchi maritingala