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goofy

goofy

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hi sis.........super duper story...........thankyou for such a beautiful story........................story la vara ovvoru character, story flow unga description anaithume miga arumai................first padikka arambikirappa abayan mela sema kobam and milir mela romba love vandhadhu but padika padika abayan melayum oru attraction vanduruchu...............both abayan and milir are so sweet ......and enaku indha kadhaila innum omba pidichadhu kandhimathi and both cute kutties aathvi,saathvi dhan.........they both are adorable and sweet........................adhukulla mudinchiruchenu varuthama irukku...............:Puszi::smiley15::smiley2:
 
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Mohana govindaraj

Bronze Winner
கதை மிகவும் அருமை.உங்களது வர்ணனையில் ஒவ்வொரு epi யையும் ஓவியமாக கண் முன்னே நிறுத்தி விட்டீர்கள்.
All the best.💐💐
 
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Duraiarasi

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Arumaiyana kadhai.nan ungal kadhaiyil ithaithan mudhalavathaga padikeren. Apayanin unarvugal arumai. Milirin unarvugaluku mathipalikiren. Anal konjam lovely ana epilogue kuduthal, apayanin kathirupukku mathippu kidaitha mathiri irukum. Pls epilogue kuduka try pannunga.
 
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