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ஆதியிவன்..!!-யின் கருத்து திரி

Raji anbu

எஸ்எம்எஸ் குழுமம் எழுத்தாளர்
Till now I was giving comments as smilies as I cannot type in the comments box. Now that problem solved.
வாவ்... சூப்பர்..நிஷா..

அப்போ அடுத்த யூடி போட்டுட்டேன்.. படிச்சிட்டு எப்படியிருகென்று சொல்லியே தீரணும்..😀
 

Anithabala

Active member
Super ud Raji mam... Ravi.. veera .. prajin vivathangal kekkum pothu konjam payama than erukku.. appadiyae holiwood flim partha effect... Wonderful mam.. may be in future this might be happen.. antha mugam illaa alien than villanoo??? Police veera and prajin na kandupidichudu vangala.. kandupidicha Enna nadukkum.. paysngra suspense ah erukku... Prajin kovam thannai than kadhal kondu kadhaliyai kondu sari seinja vitham arumai... Ur narration as usual excellent
 

Tamil novel lover

Bronze Winner
First of all my hearty wishes to your new try ma’am. 👍
I too will imagine sometimes what the future might be like. 😅 but not till this extent 😅😅😅😂

A very tensed episode Ma’am. 🤯🤯. But I love the character of Riya’s Mother (Sharmila).
Then the love😍 and playfulness 🤪😜of Prajan and innocence 🙂of Veera is really wonderful.

Waiting to see the thrilling experience.
Hope this story also will take me to future, like a tour around India in last story
 

Chitra Balaji

Bronze Winner
Super Super Super mam...... Semma semma episode.... அந்த alien 👾 appadi vanthu irupaan....Ravi.. Veera.. Prajan thappicha maari ah.... இல்ல இந்த laboratory la iruntha collaboration ah... Theriyala ah... அவன் ஏன் அழிவை paththi nenaikiran.... Appa அப்பா namba prajan ku enna kovam payagarama varuthe... Enna panna poorano theriyala ah.... சி டி.வி la checking la வேற kandupichitaanga போல ah.... Athu appadi உருவம் ah theriyaama Iruku camera la... Appo இவங்க ஸ்டண்ட் panranga la appo இவங்க உருவம் theriyaathaa.. அப்படினா அவங்க appayo கண்டுபிடிச்சி irukanume... En ah ஸ்டண்ட் பண்ணும் poothu stage la இவங்க மூணு பேரும் தானே இருகாங்க... Onnum puriyala ah.... Riya ah nenaicha ஒடனே prajan ku kovam கொஞ்சம் கொஞ்சம் koranjidichila.... Super... Riya அம்மா vera medical report கேக்கறாங்க.... Super Super intersting ah pooguthu semma.... Love you mam.... Eagerly waiting for next episode mam....
 
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