All rights reserved. No part of this publication may be reproduced, distributed, or transmitted in any form or by any means, including photocopying, recording, or other electronic or mechanical methods, without the prior written permission of the publisher, except in the case of brief quotations embodied in critical reviews and certain other noncommercial uses permitted by copyright law.

“ EOKI Atrocities “

Status
Not open for further replies.

RPG

Bronze Winner
married lifela oreoru step ivan intha relationshipukkaaga senjiruntha mahaava namba thappu sollalaam ... oru ponna ava sammadam kooda ketkaama yetho oru paiyana adopt panna solradhu eppudi ethukka mudiyum

kalyanathukku munnadi iruntha vaai naala thaan ava first nightla avanukku kadhai sonnna. aana ivan eppudi avakitta bhave pannan. past pathi sollaama kooda oru room mateaavaavdhu avan avaloda viruppu veruppu yethavadu therinjika muyarchi pannaaanaa. verum sunday ellar munndiyum avala early stages of marriagela asinga paduthi irukkaaan. indha madiri oru ponnukitta nadantha yentha ponnum vaayadaichu povaaathaan. yen oruthan avala velila kootitu poi irukkalaam illa. ivalukku communicate panna theriyalaina ivan yen antha step edukalai.he just didnt careas long as his needs were satisfied. he never cared for her. ippa saruvukku ivlo paarthu paarthu seyya theriyumbodhu mahaannu varache why he expect her to initiate. avan ava thanna kenjanumnu expect panraan. athu avan egovai satisfy pannuthu. charuvod aappa kitta vaangina adikku idu moolamma ego satisfy panraan. lifeoda failuresaa avala adakki satisfy pannikiraan. thats what losers do. if they cant win mighty they harass weaker ones and balance it. yaarum nambara madiri life poora nadanthukalai.so iva namabanumnu nenaikiraan.he is vile,egoistic.misogynist. big loser.
exactly u r right he satisfies his ego with maha
he is a looser 100%
poor illiterate idudan avana avala ipdi nadatha reason
 

VRao

Bronze Winner
dei vrao
yettu surakai kariku udavadhu nu unaku teriyada da
evlo padichi topper ah irundum ena use life ah padika terila avanuku
seriously avandan depressionla irukan
20 21 lam hero worship panra vayasu
apdi irukumbodu ivana oru ponnu hero range la paakumbodu avanuku epdi solla
periya achievement adu since avangaloda maturity level exposure world knowledge ellame romba kammiya irukum
but experience oru maturity kudukum aana paal paiyankalugu adu avlo sikiram varadilla
maha alavuku violence illatiyum ipdi maturity illada full selfish aagavum i am d boss apdingra mentality oda pala pasanga ipavum irukanga
neeye sollu violence usage of bad words illaye thavira
inda maaathiri self identity ya lose panna ponnunga neraya per da
adukenna sollution

nee sonna paru roadla mandaya odachanu
avanllam manushane illada avan kooda vazhradu waste
better she lead a peacefull life without him

idhe thaan naanum solren mahaa needs a fresh life. 33 vaysula ivanukkum ivan oda keduketta loverukkum illada maturity veli ulagam parkaatha mahaavukku eppadi varum. old paatillaam saagara varaikum husbandukku bayandu thaan vazhndaanga. yeda goodamaa eppavavathu pesi thittu vaangi innum quiet aayiduvaanga. mahaa apdi patta oru ponnu thaan. ava veliya vandhu ulagatha purichu appuram ivana eppudi vaikanumo appudi vaikanum. mental aayi avaneye theduraa. romba kashtama irundudhu adha padikum bodhu. andha egova thaan ava inime satisfy panna koodathu. ellathukkum ennai kenjanumnu nenaikirane athu inime nadakave koodathu. athanaala thaane ponnunga velaikku ponumnu solrom. iva vishayathula adu nichayam correct
 

RPG

Bronze Winner
idhe thaan naanum solren mahaa needs a fresh life. 33 vaysula ivanukkum ivan oda keduketta loverukkum illada maturity veli ulagam parkaatha mahaavukku eppadi varum. old paatillaam saagara varaikum husbandukku bayandu thaan vazhndaanga. yeda goodamaa eppavavathu pesi thittu vaangi innum quiet aayiduvaanga. mahaa apdi patta oru ponnu thaan. ava veliya vandhu ulagatha purichu appuram ivana eppudi vaikanumo appudi vaikanum. mental aayi avaneye theduraa. romba kashtama irundudhu adha padikum bodhu. andha egova thaan ava inime satisfy panna koodathu. ellathukkum ennai kenjanumnu nenaikirane athu inime nadakave koodathu. athanaala thaane ponnunga velaikku ponumnu solrom. iva vishayathula adu nichayam correct
dei poosanika mandaya adathanda naanum solren anda bowl a avan thala mela potu odachirukanum
motha egovum ticket vangi paralogathuku poirukum
ada pannalada inda oomapanni
 

RPG

Bronze Winner
nee illana ennoda ulagam asthamichi poidadu
nee illama ennala vazha mudiyum
u r nothing to me
ida avanuku puriya vecha pothum
avan ivala kobama paaka kooda bayapaduvan
apuram enga irundu kai neeturadu koduma paduthuradu ellam
avan iva epdi irukanumnu expect panralo ada ellam iva podi podi ya odachi
avana iva kaala vilundu kadhara vekkanum
idadan da na expect panren
neenga enada nu vetti vidu ooti vidunu
enaku bp ethuringa
 

VRao

Bronze Winner
nee illana ennoda ulagam asthamichi poidadu
nee illama ennala vazha mudiyum
u r nothing to me
ida avanuku puriya vecha pothum
avan ivala kobama paaka kooda bayapaduvan
apuram enga irundu kai neeturadu koduma paduthuradu ellam
avan iva epdi irukanumnu expect panralo ada ellam iva podi podi ya odachi
avana iva kaala vilundu kadhara vekkanum
idadan da na expect panren
neenga enada nu vetti vidu ooti vidunu
enaku bp ethuringa

dei athu ava avana vittu ponaa mattum thaan mudiyum .. illana avan ammava kootu serthu avala thiruppi thiruppi ellar munnadiyum asinga paduthuvaan. idhe ava than veedunnu vera veetukku poittu avana nerunga kooda mudiyama seiyanum. ore veetla irunda adhu nadakkadhu. max avan avala thodaama irunthu innum avala ignore pannuvaan. iva avana ignore pannanum.appidiye dhanamum matha dil lathchanatha therinjikanaum. setha kooda oruthiyum thanni kudukka koodathu. appa thaan adhukkum buddhi varum,.seenu pondatiya vittu mahaa kodda pona thaan ivalukku mahaa voda feelings puriyum. enna poosanikka mandai solladadaa
 
Status
Not open for further replies.
Top