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Rajeeya

Rajeeya

எஸ்எம்எஸ் குழுமம் எழுத்தாளர்
Vithubala said:
Etho thonunatha solrenpa
# justAnswering
1. Urimaiya kudutha thana pa eduthtukamudiyum.. Avala eduthukaathathuku kaaranam avaloda inferiority complex ah irkalam.. Panathula, padipula, alagula🤷‍♀️🤷‍♀️ avanoda kammi nu ovoru thadavaiyum avanum avanga ammavum nyabaga paduthite thana irkanga.. So apdilam urimaiya urimaiya eduthukura situation avaluku illa

2. Ithuku epavum solra pathil than😑😑avan nambikai varra alavuku nadanthukala.. Except that kaalla vilara moment..but avan kaalla vilavum venam apro kaala vaaravum venam..
Avan solratha seiyaratha kanna mooditu nambanumna, athu mudiyathu..ava onnum deiva piravi illa, saatharana manushi than..

3. Illa than.. Aana avan avala epayume ellarmunnadiyum vitrapo, ava mattum vittukudukanumna epdipaa.. Relationship la loveuhm sari respectuhm sari rendu pakkamum irkanum..

4. Ava irntha frustation la antha pechelam romba kammi.. Avan pesnathuku thirupi pesanumnu pesirka.. Apro as usual pesnathuku feel thana panna..avanoda past Ava manasula uruthite irnthathuku ithu oru example..avanum ava kitta manasu vittu pesala, avalayum kekra edathula vaikala..adhumattum ilama ellarum munnadiyum pesi pesi kaaya paduthuran, athuku avlo kooda thirupi kudukalaina epdi, avalum uyiruhm unarvum irkra ponnu thana

5. Husband ah nambi avanoda ex ah veetuku ulla vidrathu, 🙄🙄🤐🤔mmm.. Konjam illa rombave kashtam than.. Wife ku possessiveness nu onnu irkatha😅 athu epdi ex ellam ulla vida mudiyum.. Ivan periya uthamanaave irkatume🤐🤐.. Adhu epdi mudiyum😅😅
Actuallah avan miratunaalum ulla vitruka koodathu.. Athuvum un ponnuku en perthan vaipanu theriyumnu perumapadra ex'alam 😠😤

6. Iva vidalaina avan poiruvana🤦‍♀️🤦‍♀️ roadla ninnu maanatha vanguvan.. Athu antha charu munnala🤦‍♀️🤦‍♀️

7. Avala pesra edathula yaarum vaikala.. Avala adakuratha than ammavum pullaiyum seshamama panuvangale.. Ava oru maari torture na, avanga amma vera level.. Athuvum sonangale oru dialog.. Ipave ivlo pesriye, avan mattum unna nalla vachirntha veetaye pirichurvenu🤦‍♀️🤦‍♀️🤷‍♀️ ithu vida oru koduma enna irku.. Antha pillaye paavam.. Ithula Ivan amma vera😠😠ipdi irntha Ennatha than pesurathu..
Ipa Ava eduthurka mudivu than crctuh.. Silent ah irnthu ellarayum saavadikanum😈 ezhaiya poranthathum vazhanthathum Ava thappu kedaiyathu.. Athe maari richah poranthathu avan panna saathana kedayathu.. Appa kaasula valanthutu etho avane suyame sambaaricha maari pechu vera..

Ivan evlo thitunaaalum thitite irkalam pola.. Vatratha jeevan nadhi maari Ivan mela kovam pongi vandhutethan irku😖😖
Enna la maha va vittu kudukave mudila.. Avanga amma mela kooda enaku semma kovam than.. Avala kandukaama etho kalyanam panni thalli vitachu ini Ava vaazhka'ngura maari othungitaanga.. Enna aanalum angaye iru, athu than mariyatha'nguranga.. Avanga aniku pesnathelam nitharsanamana unmai than.. Atha ilanu sollave mudiyathu.. But nan irken nu oru vaartha solirkalam.. Athu miga periya balama irnthurkum..
Avaluku poga edam ilangurathu thana saravanan kum thanathukum periya advantagevah irku.. Enga poira poranu elakaarama irku..
But antha maamanar character semmmaaa.. Saravanaoda annas 2 peruhm super than.. Ipdi oru kudumbathula Ivan mattum epdi than ipdi poranthano🤦‍♀️🤷‍♀️🤷‍♀️

Innum enaku FB ya nenacha allu viduthhu.. 😵😵😱 athula ivanuhm Charuvum varra scenesuhnu nenachale.. Ennala ivana mahavoda hubbyah than paaka mudiyum.. Athula ethathu romance na nan avlo than😫😫😖

Nan full and fulla Maha ku than supportuh, avan pakkam enna nyayam irnthalum enaku no problem, avanoda love failure ku Maha ka reason kedayathu.. Apro avana yaarum kadathitu poi kattaya kalyanam panala, ivanthan Maha va kalyanam panirkan, so avala hurt panrathuku entha vithathulayum avanuku rights kedayathu..
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Srisuri

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Rajeeya said:
Nan Saro ku support pannala...... Avan Oru loosu piyan thaan.....😤😤😤

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Ana Inda maaku papata.....Oru silla kaelvigal......

1. Eppavadu Oru nall nee sari ta Oru manaiviya urimaiya nadandurukiya....

2. Saro va 1% nambi irrukiya?

3. Saro kaga enngaiyavadu.... 1 idatula vitukudukama paesirukiya?

4. Unna first/sec epi la tappa paesunadu kaga Vita vittu kilambunila.... Nee Saro va appadi thaanae neenachutu irruka.... Evalavu aruvarupa neenaichuruka..... 😈😈

5. Nee Saro maela nambika vachu vittukula vitutiya.....? Illaiyae... Avan mirathi thanae vandurukan.....

6. Eppadi ellam nadakumnu thaan Saro appa saru va vittukula vidla.... At least avaruku support panniya..... Nallavallatham ulla vitutu Enna paesuna.....

7. Paesavaendiya Ella idatulaium vaila 10 kaolakattaiya vachukitu.... Manasukula paesuna... Yaaruku teriyum.....

#Just asking...

Ivanga Rendu paerumkum paeriya difference illa.... Onu paesiyae kaolludu.... Onu paesama kaolludu......

Ennaku terinja varaikum..... Saro avan wife nambura allavuku..... avan wife Saro va nambala...... Ippa nu illa eppaiumae nambala....... Avalavu ku vaera valli illada Nala Saro kuda irruka... Apa 1% love illaiya?

Nan Saro ku kandipa support pannala.... Adae madri thaan inda makku papa kum..... Support pannala....

Inda story Oru nalla experience..... Raomba edarthamana story....... Every character has its own nature..... Up and downs.....😁😁😁

Idu ennoda opinion....👍🤪 Just a opinion on the characters thaan.....😜😜
tappa irrunda manichikanga 😁😁
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Hi mam, gud mrg
#just sharing my thoughts, pizhaigal irunthaal mannikavum
1. From d day 1 did Saravanan properly talked with Maha? Nyt kudich2 vanthu UNAKU OKVA UNAKU OKVA? nu matum aval kita pesuran. Athuku matum than ava kita pesuran next day mrg vera ma3 behave panirnan. Ipadi pattavan kita ena mam pesa mudiyum? Aparam thana uriymai elam yedir parka mudiyum.



2. Nambra ma3 sir enna pani irukarnu enaku theriyala? Yerkanave avan chaaru therinjo theriyamalo tholaichtaan. But life gave him second chance, Maha kita avan konji2 Iruka vendam. Atleast ozhunga treat pani iruntha kandipa maha avan sonathum solathathum nambi irupa.

3. We get for what we paid only know? Avana yaarum vitte kuduka vendam mam bcoz his egoistic character atha sirapa senji mudichidum. Bcoz Saravanan doesn't know how to handle the situation.

For example: when Maha become pregnant, he decided to abort. Avan decide panurathuku munadi he should have shared his opinion to Maha. Kandipa purijik2 Maha abort panirupa. But what he did? Directly went to the doctor and said we don't want dis child abort it nu soluran. Athu thappu ilaya? This girl maha is from village 1st ke2 odane shock ago azha than seiva v2ku ponavodane athu problem aagi Saravanan vera way ilama yelarkum munadi then only he said reason. Avan Reason 100%correct than but he don't know how to handle the situation, sothapa than theriyum. Apo kuda Maha decided to abort the child for him but those kundani's sirapa avanga velaiya parthanga.

4. That was very heat moment mam argument ela Saravanan yelarum munadiyum pondatiya asinga paduthum pothu ava onnum theiva piravi ilaya take it easy nu yedith2 porathuku. Avan mela nambikai ilama kevalamana thought irunthu iruntha iva yen ma kozhandhaiku avanoda ex lover name veka allow pana pora? Before keeping their daughter's name as chaaru, Maha kita soli irukalam athuvum panala? Antha ponnu enna than pananum? Ok lover ah maraka mudiyama than entha name vechi irukarnu thana thonum? Moreover when she wa carrying his child, ava irukala sethalanu kuda parka varatha best husband. 1st pregnancy la husband ah theduvanga ela wife hum. Antha crucial time la avan ava kuda ila. Keta ne yen pechu keklaila apo anubhavi nu sola vendiyathu. But money mattum kuduthuduvaru athula kandipa kutham sola mudiyathu I respect that. Avan wife n kids ku avan than selavu pananumnu athula mattum theliva irukaru.

5. Mam Saravanan America porathukum reason solala anga irunthu varum pothu Chaaru and Sid ah kuti2 vanthathkum reason solala thidirunu husband kuda oru family vanthu nikum pothu yentha wife ah irunthalum shock agi than nipa. Avanuku irukra kozhupu iruke, poi aarthi yedith2 vaa nu solurathu elam over? Shock agama avan sona ma3 aarthi yedukanuma???

6. He never gave explaination for his actions but expecting others to give respect to his decisions nu ninaikrathu elam konajam ila rombave over. If he explained the current situation to Maha, kandipa Maha avangaluku aarthi yeduthu and avangala feel like family solirupa.

7. Apadiye avan pesa vitutalum.


Adai Saravana ethuku melayum una thituven but thita vendam nu parkuren bcoz power cut agiduchu n no charge in my phone. Thapichu odi poidu.

Just shared my thoughts. If my thoughts hurted anybody am really sorry.
 
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Rajeeya

Rajeeya

எஸ்எம்எஸ் குழுமம் எழுத்தாளர்
Srisuri said:
Hi mam, gud mrg
#just sharing my thoughts, pizhaigal irunthaal mannikavum
1. From d day 1 did Saravanan properly talked with Maha? Nyt kudich2 vanthu UNAKU OKVA UNAKU OKVA? nu matum aval kita pesuran. Athuku matum than ava kita pesuran next day mrg vera ma3 behave panirnan. Ipadi pattavan kita ena mam pesa mudiyum? Aparam thana uriymai elam yedir parka mudiyum.



2. Nambra ma3 sir enna pani irukarnu enaku theriyala? Yerkanave avan chaaru therinjo theriyamalo tholaichtaan. But life gave him second chance, Maha kita avan konji2 Iruka vendam. Atleast ozhunga treat pani iruntha kandipa maha avan sonathum solathathum nambi irupa.

3. We get for what we paid only know? Avana yaarum vitte kuduka vendam mam bcoz his egoistic character atha sirapa senji mudichidum. Bcoz Saravanan doesn't know how to handle the situation.

For example: when Maha become pregnant, he decided to abort. Avan decide panurathuku munadi he should have shared his opinion to Maha. Kandipa purijik2 Maha abort panirupa. But what he did? Directly went to the doctor and said we don't want dis child abort it nu soluran. Athu thappu ilaya? This girl maha is from village 1st ke2 odane shock ago azha than seiva v2ku ponavodane athu problem aagi Saravanan vera way ilama yelarkum munadi then only he said reason. Avan Reason 100%correct than but he don't know how to handle the situation, sothapa than theriyum. Apo kuda Maha decided to abort the child for him but those kundani's sirapa avanga velaiya parthanga.

4. That was very heat moment mam argument ela Saravanan yelarum munadiyum pondatiya asinga paduthum pothu ava onnum theiva piravi ilaya take it easy nu yedith2 porathuku. Avan mela nambikai ilama kevalamana thought irunthu iruntha iva yen ma kozhandhaiku avanoda ex lover name veka allow pana pora? Before keeping their daughter's name as chaaru, Maha kita soli irukalam athuvum panala? Antha ponnu enna than pananum? Ok lover ah maraka mudiyama than entha name vechi irukarnu thana thonum?

5. Mam Saravanan America porathukum reason solala anga irunthu varum pothu Chaaru and Sid ah kuti2 vanthathkum reason solala thidirunu husband kuda oru family vanthu nijum pothu entha wife ah irunthalum shock agi than nipa. Avanuku irukra kozhupu iruke iva kita vanthu poi aarthi yedith2 vaa nu solurathu elam over? Shock agama avan sona3 aarthi yedukanuma???

6. He never gave explaination for his actions but expecting others to give respect to his decisions nu ninaikrathu elam konajam ila rombave over. If he explained the current situation to Maha, kandipa Maha avangaluku aarthi yeduthu and avangala feel like family solirupa.

7. Apadiye avan pesa vitutalum.


Adai Saravana ethuku melayum una thituven but thita vendam nu parkuren bcoz power cut agiduchu n no charge in my phone. Thapichu odi poidu.

Just shared my thoughts. If my thoughts hurted anybody am really sorry.
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👏👏👏👏

Ennai paoruta varaikum.... Saro Oru loosu piyan....😈😈. Thimiru pudhachavan....😠😠 Lighta soonapanna..... 😂😂😂
Kaobatula Oru monster.....😜😈

Ana... I felt Makku papa edukumae initiative edukala anda relationship......
ava thanna edaium yaosikala nu thounudu.... Always manipulated by others nu.....

Onu avana nambanum illaiya
Avan saru va kuthithu Vanda Apa sanda paoturukanum.... Stubborn na ninurukanum.... She had a choice Ava mamanar avalavku support pannanga.....

2 um pannama irrundadu tappu.....

Hope innimale she will stand nu.... 😜😂🤪🤪
 
Vithubala

Vithubala

எஸ்எம்எஸ் குழுமம் எழுத்தாளர்
Rajeeya said:
👏👏👏👏

Ennai paoruta varaikum.... Saro Oru loosu piyan....😈😈. Thimiru pudhachavan....😠😠 Lighta soonapanna..... 😂😂😂
Kaobatula Oru monster.....😜😈

Ana... I felt Makku papa edukumae initiative edukala anda relationship......
ava thanna edaium yaosikala nu thounudu.... Always manipulated by others nu.....

Onu avana nambanum illaiya
Avan saru va kuthithu Vanda Apa sanda paoturukanum.... Stubborn na ninurukanum.... She had a choice Ava mamanar avalavku support pannanga.....

2 um pannama irrundadu tappu.....

Hope innimale she will stand nu.... 😜😂🤪🤪
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I'm not arguing here..dont consider This is an argument

Avaluku nambika illa nambika illanu solrome.. Apdi ilama irnthurntha ava avana marriage panirkave maata..

Ava avan mela irntha etho oru nambikaila (epdi than avana poi nambunalo) than kalyanam panirka.. Antha nambikaiya valara vidrathuthum, vettipodrathum saravanan kaila than irnthuthu.. Atha avan than konnu potutanee..

Oru ponnuku romba avasiyam avaloda husband support thane thavira, mamanar support illa..
Athu avaluku entha strength ah yum mana reethiya tharathu.. Athuvum avala ethirthu nikkurathu yarro illa, ava husband.. Enaku en mamanar support irkunu avanta sanda pottu jeichu mattum enna kedaikapoguthhu avaluku..

Avaluku valikumnu therinje panran, avalum valikuthunu express panra.. Valikatumnu avan nikkumbothu, Ava enna panamudiyum..

Ava nambi vandhadhu saravanan ah, avanga appa va nambi illa, antha nambikaiya odachathu avanthan..
 
Rajeeya

Rajeeya

எஸ்எம்எஸ் குழுமம் எழுத்தாளர்
Vithubala said:
I'm not arguing here..dont consider This is an argument

Avaluku nambika illa nambika illanu solrome.. Apdi ilama irnthurntha ava avana marriage panirkave maata..

Ava avan mela irntha etho oru nambikaila (epdi than avana poi nambunalo) than kalyanam panirka.. Antha nambikaiya valara vidrathuthum, vettipodrathum saravanan kaila than irnthuthu.. Atha avan than konnu potutanee..

Oru ponnuku romba avasiyam avaloda husband support thane thavira, mamanar support illa..
Athu avaluku entha strength ah yum mana reethiya tharathu.. Athuvum avala ethirthu nikkurathu yarro illa, ava husband.. Enaku en mamanar support irkunu avanta sanda pottu jeichu mattum enna kedaikapoguthhu avaluku..

Avaluku valikumnu therinje panran, avalum valikuthunu express panra.. Valikatumnu avan nikkumbothu, Ava enna panamudiyum..

Ava nambi vandhadhu saravanan ah, avanga appa va nambi illa, antha nambikaiya odachathu avanthan..
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Rajeeya

Rajeeya

எஸ்எம்எஸ் குழுமம் எழுத்தாளர்
Srisuri said:
Ipadi engala yelam polamba vititengale @kavitha mam... Amma parathevathai next epi yeppo nu konjam soli2 ponga mam.
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Avanga varanga like paotutu paoidranga..... Innum ivangai mudikalaiya....🤪🤪🤪🤪

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@kavitha mind voice.... story elluduna nanae onum solla....😎😎

Idu (me) eduku kurukum marukuma odikitu irruku 😂🤣
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Lakshmi perumal

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