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கவிதில்லையின் "எனக்கொரு காதலி இருக்கின்றாள்" - கருத்துத் திரி

VRao

Bronze Winner
Hi all

Actually I wanted to say this before itself but yellarum pongu pongunu pongitu irunthathu nala yelarum konjam jolly mood ku vanthathuku apram pesalam niniachen. Enum 2 days writer ji epi poturuvaanva. Plz one humble request keep ur mind blank and read that fb bcoz namalam melotama than saravanan pesuratha parthu2 irritate agi avana thiturom. But avanoda positive point neriya iruku atha vitutu nama yelarom paper la irukra oru black dot sorry sorry entha Tharuthalai rombave different black paper la irukra white dots nama paakala just black paper mattum than paarthom. Saravanan kula positive iruku plus a lot of negative iruku. So just want to share my inner thoughts.



1. Saravanan and maha fight la veeta vitu veliya po nu sona odane maha kelambita ilaya. Saravanan yen avala kondupoi ava amma V2 varaikum vidamum solunga?? Bus la yethi vita pathatha?? (Maha etha note panala bcoz ammaiyar avangaloda feelings of India la irunthaange😂😂😂) bcoz he don't want to leaver her alone

2. Next maha va railway station ke saravanan vanthu avala pick up panikuvaan.(apa kuda maha ammaiyar yosikala bcoz avanga than feelings of India la irunthangale😂😂😂)

3. Railway station veliyave Saravanan ketpan UNAKU ENNA VIDA UN SELF RESPECT IMO??(apavum nama madam yosikala)

4. Saravanan nala ava ilatha antha one day avan yevalo miss pani irupanu avan bike speed ootum bothe kaati irupaan like maha avana vitu piriya mudiyatha madiri panuvaan(in this place na apdiye kownthathathu than but nama madam than yosikala)


5. Nyt Evan pasikuthu nu sona odane maha kizha poiduva but nama thalaivar Kutty chaaru thooki2 varuvaaru y??? Bcoz avanku ava idly ooti evan sapidanum nu avanoda asaiya fulfil panipaan

6. Maha legs la vizhanumnu ninaikravan avanga room kulaye vizhunthu irukalam but avan yellor munadiyum than vizhunthan
(ithaiyum nama madam yosikala)


Maha mela irukra yentha point yelam ava brain kula puchanu keta ena porutha varaikum A BIG ZERO. Ava avaloda bayatha overcome pani2 yosikave ila😂😂😂😂


But ava yosikathathunu main reason dhanam and saravanan (kaadhalum avane and kaayamum avane) than.

Definitely ethuku aparam nadanthathu yellam BIG DISASTER than nan kandipa atha othukreen. But there s some positive sides in him plz note it.


Still I belive he treated chaaru as his child only. But avanku yenga theriyum saguravaluku cancer cells adiga agidumo nu avan kavalai Pattan but chaaru ammaiyar ku hormones cells than adigama work agi iruku😂😂😂😂
indha behavioura thaan PSYCHO nnu solren ... naan unnai love panrathaala abuse pannuven but nee enna nambanum yenna enakku past valigal irukku, unna pathi naan yosikamaaten but nee enna thavira yethayum yosikakoodathu.
sorry i dont think he deservea love in life
 

Srisuri

Bronze Winner
Thalaiviiiii.... Enna oru punchuh thalaiviii.... Kaadhalum avane kaayamum avane... Aaha aham aaha.. Nxt story ku title ready:smiley7::smiley7: ayoo thalaiviii neenga yen ivlo kastapatu avanukaga pesringa..
Avan than avan vaiya sani bagavanku vaadakaiku vitrukaaane.. Epdiyum avan innum edaakoodamaathan pesvan..but irnthalum neenga solringanra ore reasonkaaga antha cooker mandaiyan 0.00000000000000000000000000000001% nallavan than nu othukuren
But ipdi pesra neengale, FB read panitu, avana kaluvi kaluvi uthuveengandrathula enaku entha vidhamana doubtuhm illai🤭🤭🤭 yenna avan design apdi... 🤷‍♀️🤷‍♀️🤷‍♀️ avanuku irkrathu vaai illa vaaikal🤦‍♀️
Avan than naara vai nu theriyume arase 😂 😂 avan vai than avanku yaman he is a emotional fool nu yerkanave solitene.
 

Vithubala

எஸ்எம்எஸ் குழுமம் எழுத்தாளர்
indha behavioura thaan PSYCHO nnu solren ... naan unnai love panrathaala abuse pannuven but nee enna nambanum yenna enakku past valigal irukku, unna pathi naan yosikamaaten but nee enna thavira yethayum yosikakoodathu.
sorry i dont think he deservea love in life

Well said...

Itha yen ennala oru storyah paakamudilanu innum enaku theriyala..

I seriously want to kill him.. He doesn't even deserve mercy nu thonuthu..
 

Rajeeya

எஸ்எம்எஸ் குழுமம் எழுத்தாளர்
enaku inda stroryla suthama pudikada character first daaru dan eppo us la ava avankitta nee varuvanu sonnalo appove ava oru nalla ponnukana tagudiya elanduta adu mattum illa ava ellam manusha jenmathil seerthiye illa
IDA IDA IDA DHANDA NA IVLO NAALUM KADARITU IRUNDEN
EN CHELLAM(RAJEE) ONNU SOLLUCHE NYABAGAM IRUKA
THOONGURAVANGALA YELUPALAM THOONGURA MAADIRI NADIKIRAVANGALA YELLUPA MUDIYADUNNU
CHELLAM NEEE THEERKADARISI DA
IVLO NAALUM IVANGA ELLAM INDA PACHA MANNA URUNDA PUDICHU VILAYADI IRUKAINGADA
INDA KODUMAYA NAA ENGA POI SOLLUVEN😓😓😥😥
AANALUM KADASIYA ORU PUNCH KOODUTHU THAN ORU PUNCH PONNAMANU NIRUBICHUDICHIDA INDA PULLA

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Srisuri

Bronze Winner
ADHUKKU BALI MAHAAVAA
Sis na maha Bali aadunu solala ava konjam ava bayatha vitu irunthale pothum nu soluren. Ava bayatha thandi yethuvume yosikala athu than ava pana thappu. Kandipa na othukuren avalku antha bayatha kuduthathu saravanan and dhanam than main reason.
 

RPG

Bronze Winner
Thalaiviiiii.... Enna oru punchuh thalaiviii.... Kaadhalum avane kaayamum avane... Aaha aham aaha.. Nxt story ku title ready:smiley7::smiley7: ayoo thalaiviii neenga yen ivlo kastapatu avanukaga pesringa..
Avan than avan vaiya sani bagavanku vaadakaiku vitrukaaane.. Epdiyum avan innum edaakoodamaathan pesvan..but irnthalum neenga solringanra ore reasonkaaga antha cooker mandaiyan 0.00000000000000000000000000000001% nallavan than nu othukuren
But ipdi pesra neengale, FB read panitu, avana kaluvi kaluvi uthuveengandrathula enaku entha vidhamana doubtuhm illai🤭🤭🤭 yenna avan design apdi... 🤷‍♀️🤷‍♀️🤷‍♀️ avanuku irkrathu vaai illa vaaikal🤦‍♀️
ANDA VAAIKAL PRICHANA DANMA INNI VARAIKUM THEERALA
 
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