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உமையாள் ஆதியின் 'காதலால் தவி(ர்)க்கிறேன்' - கருத்து திரி

Hema Sriram

Hema Sriram

Well-known member
Awesome story sis.. counters are xtreme🤣🤣 as usual presented in ur way😍😍😍

But pls next time try to avoid long gap between uds.. missing continuation 😔😔
 
Kowsalya21

Kowsalya21

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Wow semma story sis... feel good love story... from the beginning to end romba interesting ah kondu poiruthenga... chandu,hema,nesan friendship semma... aanava kolai innamum namma society la nadanthutu than irukku atha pathi oru social message koduthurukenga nice... Tom and Jerry mathiri first sandai pottutu irukum pothu koda avangalukkula iruntha possessive, aprom avanga love, nesan guilty ah feel panni love accept pannama irukum pothu avanoda feeling ellamae azhaga portray pannirunthenga... both couples were awesome... All the best for ur next story(y)(y)
 
PriyaPraveen

PriyaPraveen

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Awesome ending....
Indhu irappu sathiya earka mudiyala...shadhi veri pidichu avanga ponnu pakkama vayathula uruvana sisu pathi ninaikkama eevu irakkam illama konnutanglea rombave sangadamam irukku......pavam indhu ethanai adi,pathathukku nesanayum adichu athuku chandhu kodutha dandamai arumai...
antha kutra unarvukku nesan pannathu kulappam pannitan...chandu rooba rendu pera pathi yosikkama nallathu seiranu senju ipa rooba kovapattu pora...analum aasarama kalyanthuku earpadu panna veachu kalyanam panni avakitta thinarittu mallu katran...ammaniyum nalla suthala vidranga....avanoda accident nala konjam irangi rendu perum pesi chinna chinna seendal loveoda irukkarathu alagu....
Chandu poori eppavum pola avana tappa purinji pulb vangittu ennannu therinju mulikkarathu cute...epdiyo avana purinji avanga kalyanam nadakkathu arumai,chandhu unnoda unmayana kathirupuku poori cute pondatti indhu pathi therinjum theliva pesi kaioda rendu perum asaipatta mari twins baby so cute...
Swaru Piriyan cute cute lovely pair....still love niraya rombnace athai veeda adhigamna happya irukkanga,lovely ending ....
:awesome::FlyingKiss::smile1::smiley18::smiley6::smiley35::smiley37::smiley37:
 
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Laxmi

Well-known member
Superrrrr love n family n friendship story......nesan sandhu hema friendship was very nice...sometimes sandhuthan herova theriyuraru....indhumathi guest characterah irunthalam very deep.character....nice story
 
suganthi jawahar

suganthi jawahar

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Nice story umai nice ending 👌, swaru nesana vatchi senjitta Pola paavam pulla romba thaan uchipathi vitta apparam avana CRT purinjitha santhosam sadhu Ku thiruba indhu mazhla kidaichathu santhosam
 
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