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Puneet

Bronze Winner
நன்றி... பூனீத்..😊

முன்பு கொஞ்சம் ஒட்டாத உணர்வு வருகிறது என்று சொன்னீங்களே.. இப்போ ஓகேவா.😊
Double ok😉.. pirajoo attitudes pakurapa avana veraya nenaika thonala.. apram sis en ful name punitha apdiye kopdunga ☺
 
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Anithabala

Active member
Very interesting UD.. Veera prajin fight asathal... Aliens vs humans collaboration konjam payama than erukku.. ethukku entha araichi ellam.. new machine invention pola.. new human invention.. how dangerous.. ninaikkavae payangara ma erukku.. Raji mam.. Vera level ponga.. ethula human alien love.. romantic.. u r very dare to handle this subject.. Best wishes 😍😍😍😍😍😍
 

Samrithi

Well-known member
Interesting sis 👏😄 apo prajan aliyanumkum,manuchikum pirantha baby ah? Athan avanuku love feelings eruku... Nice ud.... Eagerly waiting for your next ud.keep rocking 👍
 

aishu

Bronze Winner
Oh my god.... really amazing naan teaser mattum thaan padichan.. kathai ipothaiku padika maaten....mudinchathum thaan padipen .... coz apuram yosichu yosiche mental aayirivan... really intha i love this typ of novels.. ithu elutha kandippa amzing thoughts venum... you did it raaji akka... unga 1st storya patriyum solanum... sirakai virithadum kathal , gurushesthiram, thakikum theeye, maayanathi , karupalaki and srima da novel.. ithu ellathukum mattum thaan next epi kaaha wait panitu irupan... really awsome story... love it..

1st tym ipadi periya comment poturukan.. only for your aathiyivan 😍😍😍
 

Anar

Active member
Super sis. Ethir kaalaththai patriya ungal karpanaigal arumai. Very intresting. Intha story romba pidichirucku.
 

Raji anbu

எஸ்எம்எஸ் குழுமம் எழுத்தாளர்
Double ok😉.. pirajoo attitudes pakurapa avana veraya nenaika thonala.. apram sis en ful name punitha apdiye kopdunga ☺
நன்றி... புனிதா..😊

அவன் பாதி மனிதன் தானே...😊
 

Raji anbu

எஸ்எம்எஸ் குழுமம் எழுத்தாளர்
Appo praju manithan plus alien baby praju , adhanala thaan avanaala love vum unara mudiyudhu, eager to wait next ud
நன்றி... சுகந்தி..😊

ம்ம்.. ஆமாம், ஆனாால் வேகமாக உணர்ந்துக் கொள்கிறான்..
 
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