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ஃபாத்திமா SJவின் "உயிர் உருகும் காதல்" - கருத்துத் திரி

Deepikumar

Active member
Ennathu endla ipdi oru twist:oops:naren villaina illa Ammu visayathula ABI ku potiyalara:oops:ipdi suspense la niruthitingale:cry:allu vuduthu sis:eek:madhu kudumbathuku Enna achu:rolleyes:athellam epo varum:unsure:rombave supraaaa konda poringa sis kathaiya(y)ungaloda eluthunadai ya ethana thadava paratunalum enaku ovovuru line padikum pothum thirumba sollama iruka mudila:giggle:waitinggg Naren yaaru nu theriya:giggle:
 

sornam

Active member
Nice ud sis. Suspense and emotion packed ud. Abi's feelings,Maya's perplexion ,parents struggle to withhold her are all superb. Excellent story line. Waiting eagerly to read more sis. Great effort on your part. Congrats
 

Samrithi

Well-known member
Azhaga Kathai ya kondu poringa sis.. abi Yoda manatha sonna kavithai arumai👏 abi Madhu va virumba aarambichutan atha parthu avanoda amma Nilai illathatuku Magan aasapatu thirumbi kastapaduvanonu ninachu mugatha sunaguranga right.. Rajesh enna aanan? Madhu amma & sister enna aananga? Then last yar entha aadhith? Oruvela Rajesh tha aadhith ah? Eagerly waiting for your next ud.. keep rocking 👍
 

Chitra Balaji

Bronze Winner
Super Super mam..... Enna தான் நினைவு illanaalum Havangalloda pazhaka vazhakagaal Correct ah havanga brain la pathinji Iruku இல்லையா... .. Romba pavam pa அம்மு எப்படியும் pooga mudiyama அப்படியும் pooga mudiyama.... Atha vida mosam அம்மு oda appa அம்மா நிலமை தான் கொடுமை enga havalluku நியாபகம் vinthudumonu oru oru nimizhamum bayaparathu...... Abhi oda நிலமை evvaga ellaraya vidum ரொம்ப mosam havanoda kadhal.... mam very very emotional mam.... Eppadi தான் evanga எல்லோரும் pirachannaa kalai face pani veliya vara poorangalo... Evvallu பிரச்சனைக்கு நடுவுல twist vera ஆதித்.... Who is that mam.... Namba abhi... அம்மு ku வில்லனா.... Very interesting mam... Eagerly waiting for next episode.....
 
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