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I was pondering over whether to write a comment or not since this story was over a month ago..... but recently im reading another story similar to this kind in which the hero of the story brings in his friend / ex lover to his house I felt the urge

This story starts with the heroine meeting her husband after 8 years....she believes he had married his best friend which angers her husband , because he expected her to trust him
Why didn’t the hero realise it was poorani’s possesiveness towards him lead mathi not to trust him
Poorani mathiya veetla paarthathum velila anuppu solraan initial reaction nnu consider pannalum maadikku ponapuram kooda avala anuppu solraa adhukku enna urimai irukku avalukku.... mithran the great lover yen bayandhu unakkaga kooda vida maaten solran... why can’t he say who r u to say avala annupunu? Even if she’s no more my wife I still love her thane solanum.... ivan manaiviya ava eppadi pesalaam

When porani says she should not touch nila he was silently watching her humiliating his wife...enna purushan or lover Ivan

Again in the hospital poorani said mithra is our family child avala yen namba vidanum he is quiet... does she think she has more right over his children than madhi....

Agreed mithran knows porani did sacrificed for his daughter., but doesn’t he know madhi struggled to keep his daughter alive in enemies den
Poorani maligned his lovers character when they were travelling, yet he didn’t apologise to madhi or explained for his friends behaviour
Indha storila oru dhadavai kooda mithran madhi angulla yosikalai.... he never asked her about what happened during those 8 years?

Again in hospital when madhi wanted to see her daughter he refused by saying unakku ponnu mela kooda paasamilla... cruel....
Again poorani says ava poraana vidu... y should she interfere.... he’s asking will u give up Nila as if she’s porani daughter...
Sondha manaiviya adhuvum romba love panravala velaikariya adhuvum sondha ponukke eppadi mudinjudhu avanaala
Ivan enna ninaichaan ivan veetla kuzhandai ivanodadhunnu sonna madhi ivanukku kalyanam aayirkadhunu nambanumaa
Finally he mentaller tortured her along with his friend yet didn’t apologise to his wife
Does the author think it is not necessary for a husband to apologise if he make any mistake or avan mistake innumerable pannaluya
Nobody told poorani because of her attitude towards madhi madhi didn’t go back to mithran
Indha storila poorani tan villi no matter she helped
Friendshipla limitations irukku adha avanga realise pannala
 
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Sreenitha

Sreenitha

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Am so sorry guys... Na online varave illa... So unga cmds lam miss panni eruken.... Reply panna vendiyathu panniten... Namba next story la meet pannuvom... Happy weekend
 
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