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சௌந்தர்யாசெழியனின் 'உருகியதே எனது உள்ளம்' - கருத்துத் திரி

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Bhavani Yuvaraj

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Hi mam. Hearty welcome mam. Nice start. A small suggestion. U going a very fast. I thing u go to the story in a little slow. Give a lillte more explanation in a every situtation. Then only we feel that movement. Dont mistake me. I dont have any qualification to tell more. Because of u r the people got a such a wonderful talent. Gid gifted things. I keen waiting for your next best art.

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Bhavani Yuvaraj said:
Hi mam. Hearty welcome mam. Nice start. A small suggestion. U going a very fast. I thing u go to the story in a little slow. Give a lillte more explanation in a every situtation. Then only we feel that movement. Dont mistake me. I dont have any qualification to tell more. Because of u r the people got a such a wonderful talent. Gid gifted things. I keen waiting for your next best art.

Bhavani yuvaraj
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Thank u bhavani fr ur suggestion. Neenga entha idathula na fast ta poren nu slunga na konjam slow va poren.full story um fast ta pogutha. Illa sills idathula fast ta iruka. entha situation nu slunga appatha enala mistakes CRT pana mudium.
 
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Soundi said:
Thank u bhavani fr ur suggestion. Neenga entha idathula na fast ta poren nu slunga na konjam slow va poren.full story um fast ta pogutha. Illa sills idathula fast ta iruka. entha situation nu slunga appatha enala mistakes CRT pana mudium.
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Nan solla varathu, nenga heroin intro panum pothu avanga rich status inum konjam explain panna antha mathiri imagine pani storykulla porathuku eadya irukum then collage, appuram ava colours kondu varathathu ellam inum konjam expand pani irukalam. Next next situation pora mathiri iruku suddena atha adapt panamudila.sorry nan sonathu enoda view. Ungalukunu oru view irukum atha nan understand panamal irukalam. So ungaluku eppadi thonutho appadiye podunga k va bye mam
 
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Bhavani Yuvaraj said:
Nan solla varathu, nenga heroin intro panum pothu avanga rich status inum konjam explain panna antha mathiri imagine pani storykulla porathuku eadya irukum then collage, appuram ava colours kondu varathathu ellam inum konjam expand pani irukalam. Next next situation pora mathiri iruku suddena atha adapt panamudila.sorry nan sonathu enoda view. Ungalukunu oru view irukum atha nan understand panamal irukalam. So ungaluku eppadi thonutho appadiye podunga k va bye mam
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Neenga sonna ela situation num na romba long eluthatha nenache BT readers Ku romba explain pana irritate ta irukum nu nenachutha na elathium kammi pane.BT readers Ku explain neriya irukanumnu therrichukitte so INI vara epI elame explain aathikama kodukure.
 
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Hi wish you all the best for your first baby so far the baby is getting lots of love and kisses from all the readers :love:(y)
 
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