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கவிதில்லையின் "எனக்கொரு காதலி இருக்கின்றாள்" - கருத்துத் திரி

Vithubala

எஸ்எம்எஸ் குழுமம் எழுத்தாளர்
Sis ungaluthu yellame valid point, maha before mrg she was not like tht, yes of course ava changesku kaaranam saro & dhanam mattume reason I accept tht. Mrnlg mugam koduthu pesathavankitta nerunga avaluku payam , athe kaala pokula avan nammalai disturb pannaama vittaa pothum ninaikira alavuku vanthuta.

Sis yellam kodumbathilayum prblm irukku ivanga kodumbathula romba romba overa irukku muthalla rendume perume oruthangalai oruthanga purinchukaama pirinchuta yellame ok aagidumaa, appo nadakum western cultural irukiravangalukum vithiyasam illa. Naama easya sollidalam yen kevalapattu family kooda irukanumnu but reality yevalavu cruela irukkumni anupavikiravankalukuthaan theriyum . Naan saro pannathu correctnu yeppavum justify panna maaten sis
Athe cruelty ah than ava ipave anubavichitu itka.. Athu ungalku theriyalaya.. Innum evlo naal adangi, adivaangi, porumaiya ponnunga ponumnu ethirpaakuringa.. Ponnu Independent ah vaazhrathu thappunu solli kuduthu valathathu namma culture oda thappu than.. Maha onnum avan chinna vaartha sonna odane nan kelamburanu veetuku kelambala.. Apdina thappunu solalam.. Aana ivan sollave koodatha, solrathuke koosura vaarthayelam sonathu apromum, Ava avnkooda irkanumnu solringa..
Avanga pesi theekura stage elam epayo thaanditanga..
Avan avala kadavule thappa sonalum namba maatanam.. Avlo nallavan, kudumbathuke munnadi avala kevalama pesvanam.. Athaavathu, ne nalavanu enaku theriyum, but ne enna kovapaduthuna, nan unna entha alavuku erangi vena pesuven, un character ah assassinate panuven.. I dont care if it hurts u.. apdinu solran.. Ivana neenga ellarum nalavennu solringa..
 

Vithubala

எஸ்எம்எஸ் குழுமம் எழுத்தாளர்
VITHU JI IDULLA AVA ENA PANNA SOLLUNGA
Avan yen avala roughah handle panrannu ketta... Athu than avan characternu justify panuvinga.. Yen Ava bayantha subhavamnu avanuku theriyatha.. Ivan roughah pesna, ava innum innum Ava kootukulla poi odingikuvanu theriyatha...
Kolanthaya abort panunu order podrathuku avanuku enna rights irku.. Antha kolantha mela Maha ku equal rights irku.. Abort panalamanu ketrukanume thavira.. Nalaiku panrom avlothanu solra urima avanuku kedayathu.. Antha edathula avaloda opinion avan kekave illa.. Avanuku epayum avaloda opinions pathi kavala irnthathu illa.. Avalukum opinion irkumngura arivi kooda avanuku kedaiyathu..
Maha chandramughi ah aanathuku reasoneh avan than.. Innum avan Maha va adikalanu vera ungalku kavalaya.. Neenga thana aniku soninga, avan freeze aitanu.. So avan freeze aanathula avala adika maranthutann..
Antha No solrathuku nanum already velakam kuduthuten... Neengalum poi paarunga..
Ivan ethuku avakitta nerra edhayum solava, indirectah kuruvi, pattikaadu nu solanum, Ivan enna shy boyah.. Ilaye, hurt panrathu matum neeku nerah kanna paathu pesa theriyuthu.. Itha sola mudiyatha ..ivanuku ellarum Ivan pinnadi than suthanumnu oru ego.. Nan un pinnadi varamaaten... Ne vaa nguratha tha panirkan.. Neengale than solirkinga.. Charu avan pinnadi suthuna naala, ivalum thaan pinnadiye suthanum, naama enna hurt panalum marubadiyum nammalaye suthi varanum expect panran.. Antha kuruvi storyla avan solrannu solringa.. Kuruviya paathu poramapadama, ne poi love panu nu solranu solringa.. Atha avane pana vendiyathu thana.. Yen panala.. Yenna avan ego avana thadukuthu... Ne thaan yen pinnala varanum, nan varakaaten nu solran.. Athuvum van ego than.. Love uh nu solathinga
 

Srisuri

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Avan yen avala roughah handle panrannu ketta... Athu than avan characternu justify panuvinga.. Yen Ava bayantha subhavamnu avanuku theriyatha.. Ivan roughah pesna, ava innum innum Ava kootukulla poi odingikuvanu theriyatha...
Kolanthaya abort panunu order podrathuku avanuku enna rights irku.. Antha kolantha mela Maha ku equal rights irku.. Abort panalamanu ketrukanume thavira.. Nalaiku panrom avlothanu solra urima avanuku kedayathu.. Antha edathula avaloda opinion avan kekave illa.. Avanuku epayum avaloda opinions pathi kavala irnthathu illa.. Avalukum opinion irkumngura arivi kooda avanuku kedaiyathu..
Maha chandramughi ah aanathuku reasoneh avan than.. Innum avan Maha va adikalanu vera ungalku kavalaya.. Neenga thana aniku soninga, avan freeze aitanu.. So avan freeze aanathula avala adika maranthutann..
Antha No solrathuku nanum already velakam kuduthuten... Neengalum poi paarunga..
Ivan ethuku avakitta nerra edhayum solava, indirectah kuruvi, pattikaadu nu solanum, Ivan enna shy boyah.. Ilaye, hurt panrathu matum neeku nerah kanna paathu pesa theriyuthu.. Itha sola mudiyatha ..ivanuku ellarum Ivan pinnadi than suthanumnu oru ego.. Nan un pinnadi varamaaten... Ne vaa nguratha tha panirkan.. Neengale than solirkinga.. Charu avan pinnadi suthuna naala, ivalum thaan pinnadiye suthanum, naama enna hurt panalum marubadiyum nammalaye suthi varanum expect panran.. Antha kuruvi storyla avan solrannu solringa.. Kuruviya paathu poramapadama, ne poi love panu nu solranu solringa.. Atha avane pana vendiyathu thana.. Yen panala.. Yenna avan ego avana thadukuthu... Ne thaan yen pinnala varanum, nan varakaaten nu solran.. Athuvum van ego than.. Love uh nu solathinga

Sis ava bayantha subhavam elam ila. Apdiye ava bayantha subhavam ula ponna iruntha poo yellam vechiktu saravanan kaga wait pani2 poi door open panuvala?? Avalku saravanan mela bayam iruku than ilanu sola maten but atha vida avan mela love kasthi sis.
 

Vithubala

எஸ்எம்எஸ் குழுமம் எழுத்தாளர்
Sis ava bayantha subhavam elam ila. Apdiye ava bayantha subhavam ula ponna iruntha poo yellam vechiktu saravanan kaga wait pani2 poi door open panuvala?? Avalku saravanan mela bayam iruku than ilanu sola maten but atha vida avan mela love kasthi sis.
Poo vachutu pona bayantha subhavam illayanu enaku theriyathu...
Neenga sonna maari avan mela Ava vachirntha loveah avan kochapaduthitan.. Ithuku mela avankuda serrathuku intha Maha naala vena mudiyalam... . But it's practically impossible..
 

Srisuri

Bronze Winner
Poo vachutu pona bayantha subhavam illayanu enaku theriyathu...
Neenga sonna maari avan mela Ava vachirntha loveah avan kochapaduthitan.. Ithuku mela avankuda serrathuku intha Maha naala vena mudiyalam... . But it's practically impossible..
Avan yaara sis asinga paduthraan avanoda wife ah thane sis avanoda sari pathiya thana??? apdi paartha kuda athula avanum sernthu than avana avanaye Sethu thana asinga paduthiktaan.
 

RPG

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Avan yen avala roughah handle panrannu ketta... Athu than avan characternu justify panuvinga.. Yen Ava bayantha subhavamnu avanuku theriyatha.. Ivan roughah pesna, ava innum innum Ava kootukulla poi odingikuvanu theriyatha...
Kolanthaya abort panunu order podrathuku avanuku enna rights irku.. Antha kolantha mela Maha ku equal rights irku.. Abort panalamanu ketrukanume thavira.. Nalaiku panrom avlothanu solra urima avanuku kedayathu.. Antha edathula avaloda opinion avan kekave illa.. Avanuku epayum avaloda opinions pathi kavala irnthathu illa.. Avalukum opinion irkumngura arivi kooda avanuku kedaiyathu..
Maha chandramughi ah aanathuku reasoneh avan than.. Innum avan Maha va adikalanu vera ungalku kavalaya.. Neenga thana aniku soninga, avan freeze aitanu.. So avan freeze aanathula avala adika maranthutann..
Antha No solrathuku nanum already velakam kuduthuten... Neengalum poi paarunga..
Ivan ethuku avakitta nerra edhayum solava, indirectah kuruvi, pattikaadu nu solanum, Ivan enna shy boyah.. Ilaye, hurt panrathu matum neeku nerah kanna paathu pesa theriyuthu.. Itha sola mudiyatha ..ivanuku ellarum Ivan pinnadi than suthanumnu oru ego.. Nan un pinnadi varamaaten... Ne vaa nguratha tha panirkan.. Neengale than solirkinga.. Charu avan pinnadi suthuna naala, ivalum thaan pinnadiye suthanum, naama enna hurt panalum marubadiyum nammalaye suthi varanum expect panran.. Antha kuruvi storyla avan solrannu solringa.. Kuruviya paathu poramapadama, ne poi love panu nu solranu solringa.. Atha avane pana vendiyathu thana.. Yen panala.. Yenna avan ego avana thadukuthu... Ne thaan yen pinnala varanum, nan varakaaten nu solran.. Athuvum van ego than.. Love uh nu solathinga
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