Priya Subramani
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ஆமா சிஸ்... நீங்க சொல்லுறது ரொம்ப ரொம்ப சரி... அதே மாதிரி நாம நெறைய பேரை பாக்குறோம்... ஆனா சரோ பேசுனது பண்ணுனது எல்லாம் அலட்சியம் ங்குற category லயா வரும்..??
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Lakshmivijay
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Priyasaravanan
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Athukku thaane wait pandrom
sis .......kaaviya kadhala sikkiramaa mudichuttu maha thannoda seiyalaala avana entha alavukku feel vaikkuraanu paakkanum 
..........avanga life innemeyathu maaranum ilaiyaa mahavukku avanoda anbu kadhal mattum illa mariyaathaiyum kidaikkanum
Vithubala
எஸ்எம்எஸ் குழுமம் எழுத்தாளர்
Avan alatchiya paduthalye sis.. Asingamla paduthuran.. Apa ivaluku ethathu aana than avan nelamaiya unaruvana (thirunthuvana nu keka mudila.. Yenna neenga avan thappe panala nu solvinga)
Reality padi than story na.. apa kadaisi vara maha ellathayum poruthutu porathu thana.. Ithuthan vaazhkainu ethukurathu thane.. Apro epdi inga happy ending? Happy ending mostly reality la possible illaye sis..
kavitha
எஸ்எம்எஸ் குழுமம் எழுத்தாளர்
Yeppadi sollaalam mmm avan kobathai kaatura idam appadithan ithuvaraikum mahava treat pannirukan, ithu urumaiyala kooda irukalam ivathaane yendra alachiyamaaga kooda irukalam
Thiruppi katta theriyathavanga appadi than avanga manasula yarukkum theriyatha irukkam irukkum. Athu oru vitha mentaly disturbed level. Appadi than justify pannanum. Etho oru karanam
Vithubala
எஸ்எம்எஸ் குழுமம் எழுத்தாளர்
Correct.. Ipa maha ku theva love illa.. RespectAthukku thaane wait pandrom
Avan avala madhikanum. Ne enaku romba mukkiyamnu puriya vaikanum.. Avakita entha vishayam naalum discuss pananum.. Evlo chinna vishayama irnthalum. Avala munniruthi ellam pananum.. Oru naal kaalla vilundha podhadhu.. Ivan ivlo naal panathu ithu than marundha irkumonuenaku thonudhuu..
Avaluku theva love kandipa illa.. Ava antha stageah lam thaandita nu thonudhu
kavitha
எஸ்எம்எஸ் குழுமம் எழுத்தாளர்
Correct sis happy ending real lifela kidayathu ithu story oralavukuthaan realitya kaata mudiyum , yes mahaaku adivizhunthaathaan ivan adankuvan , avanukum sila pains undu sis athai kaatura idam mahaa, oruvelai ava aaruthala anichuruntha maarirupaano yennavo
kavitha
எஸ்எம்எஸ் குழுமம் எழுத்தாளர்
Correct sis
Vithubala
எஸ்எம்எஸ் குழுமம் எழுத்தாளர்
Athavathu short ah solanumna. Avan avala oru saga manushiya nenaikala.. Oru stressburster ah use panirkan.. Apdithan enaku thonudhu