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கவிதில்லையின் "எனக்கொரு காதலி இருக்கின்றாள்" - கருத்துத் திரி

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yyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy im saying about life not that devil
he got a second chance right??? atha yen avan correct ah use panikala? thats my question here. life yellarukum second chance kudukathu but avanku life second chance kuduthuchu but avan seriya use paniktana? nenga maha use panikala nu solurenga.

oru husband wife ah avanoda pain ku medicine ma3 use panurathe antha ponnu asingam thana? entha makku maha vum avanku paavam parthu she adpoted to it. yellam antha dhanam nala vanthachu. ivala yaaravthu advice kuduka sonangala? so saravanan used her like a medicine to his pain. avanku yepaellam manasu kashtama irukum pothu avanku Maha thevai padura but ivaloda kashtathla ivan kuda irukana?

that day avaluku forehead la irunthu blood vaarum pothu ivanku chaaru matum than kannuku therinja... maha pathi v2la yaar kita yavthu maha ku adipatu irukum solanumnu kuda avanku thonalaye y?? bcoz avanoda important list la maha varave ilanu thane artham.
 

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yappa idhu ulaga maha baltida
na startingl irundu unga ellar madiriyum bp yera ambulancela yera alavuku tension oda padichen apo saro mela semma kaandula irupen how dare he was to treat his wife like this adu enna romba badichichu maha mela unmayave paavama irukum idukumelayum nee ivankoda irukanumanu na romba yosichiruken renduperum enna romba disturb pannuvang naal full. But at point i started to see saro's point of view and what he is going through and his expectations, na terinchita varaikum avan onum avan past kaga avlo urugala maha nenachirunda ipo irukura saro illa nu purinchadu then i started to support him but not blindly . being a woman we cannot always put ourself in a pathetic situation rather i believe we are situation makers hope u understand
 

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he got a second chance right??? atha yen avan correct ah use panikala? thats my question here. life yellarukum second chance kudukathu but avanku life second chance kuduthuchu but avan seriya use paniktana? nenga maha use panikala nu solurenga.

oru husband wife ah avanoda pain ku medicine ma3 use panurathe antha ponnu asingam thana? entha makku maha vum avanku paavam parthu she adpoted to it. yellam antha dhanam nala vanthachu. ivala yaaravthu advice kuduka sonangala? so saravanan used her like a medicine to his pain. avanku yepaellam manasu kashtama irukum pothu avanku Maha thevai padura but ivaloda kashtathla ivan kuda irukana?

that day avaluku forehead la irunthu blood vaarum pothu ivanku chaaru matum than kannuku therinja... maha pathi v2la yaar kita yavthu maha ku adipatu irukum solanumnu kuda avanku thonalaye y?? bcoz avanoda important list la maha varave ilanu thane artham.
inga enoda kovam fulla maha mela dan being a woman i couldnt digest that he uses her for his pain and pleasure, anda idiot mahavum maamiyar sonnadum poita arivilla avaluku adunaal varaikum drink panama vandadan ok solvenu irunda but yaaro oruthar ok sollunu sonadum poita just think yaar sonalum yaarum pogamatanga inga avalukum anda intention irundu iruku dhanam sonadudan saakunu kelambitta y can't u control urself
anga nee edam koduthu avankita valanchita so avan ada permanent akitan
 

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apuram madam ku 5 yrs kalichu gnanaudayam vandu roomku pogamatagalam y comala irundiya illa selective amnesiava
 

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எஸ்எம்எஸ் குழுமம் எழுத்தாளர்
inga enoda kovam fulla maha mela dan being a woman i couldnt digest that he uses her for his pain and pleasure, anda idiot mahavum maamiyar sonnadum poita arivilla avaluku adunaal varaikum drink panama vandadan ok solvenu irunda but yaaro oruthar ok sollunu sonadum poita just think yaar sonalum yaarum pogamatanga inga avalukum anda intention irundu iruku dhanam sonadudan saakunu kelambitta y can't u control urself
anga nee edam koduthu avankita valanchita so avan ada permanent akitan
Ava yes sonathuku reason kavi sis than..maha illa.. Neenga paavam avala thitathinga
 
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inga enoda kovam fulla maha mela dan being a woman i couldnt digest that he uses her for his pain and pleasure, anda idiot mahavum maamiyar sonnadum poita arivilla avaluku adunaal varaikum drink panama vandadan ok solvenu irunda but yaaro oruthar ok sollunu sonadum poita just think yaar sonalum yaarum pogamatanga inga avalukum anda intention irundu iruku dhanam sonadudan saakunu kelambitta y can't u control urself
anga nee edam koduthu avankita valanchita so avan ada permanent akitan
Enakum ava mela antha vishayathla kovam iruku. Avaloda antha muttal thanamana decision la than Ivan ipadi aaduran. But one more thing v have to notice she has one insecurity feel in her side. Athuku yetha ma3 dhanam enamo ava pulla ozhungu ma3 maha parthu tharatharam parthu marriage pani irukanum solurathu avalukula complex feel inject panitanga. Enga life la yethavthu thappa nandanthudumonu bayanthu avanku valanji kuduthuta athoda action than ipa avalku reflect agi iruku.
 

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apuram madam ku 5 yrs kalichu gnanaudayam vandu roomku pogamatagalam y comala irundiya illa selective amnesiava
1st neenga sontha othupen sis ipa soluratha thappu. 5yrs panatha ipavum thodarnthu pannunu solurathu thappu. He was using her atleast avaluku ipavathu brain work agi iruku nu v should appreciate than pananume thavira. Ne apdi irunthavanthana ipavum apadiye irunu solurathu thapu. As a women I don't accept this.


If a women says no means no only. Athuku nee chaaru kuda close pazhaguviya?? Apo athu ku enna meaning NE ILLANA PODI ENAKU AALA ILANU solura ma3 iruku.
 

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Enakum ava mela antha vishayathla kovam iruku. Avaloda antha muttal thanamana decision la than Ivan ipadi aaduran. But one more thing v have to notice she has one insecurity feel in her side. Athuku yetha ma3 dhanam enamo ava pulla ozhungu ma3 maha parthu tharatharam parthu marriage pani irukanum solurathu avalukula complex feel inject panitanga. Enga life la yethavthu thappa nandanthudumonu bayanthu avanku valanji kuduthuta athoda action than ipa avalku reflect agi iruku.
so her action in past is his reaction in the present simple iduku yen nama adichittu savanum
 

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எஸ்எம்எஸ் குழுமம் எழுத்தாளர்
Enakum ava mela antha vishayathla kovam iruku. Avaloda antha muttal thanamana decision la than Ivan ipadi aaduran. But one more thing v have to notice she has one insecurity feel in her side. Athuku yetha ma3 dhanam enamo ava pulla ozhungu ma3 maha parthu tharatharam parthu marriage pani irukanum solurathu avalukula complex feel inject panitanga. Enga life la yethavthu thappa nandanthudumonu bayanthu avanku valanji kuduthuta athoda action than ipa avalku reflect agi iruku.
Avaloda insecurity feeling than ava othukuttadhuku reasonah irkalam. Oru kolanthanu vandhuta avan vitutu poga maatannu ava nambirkalam.. Porakaatha kolantha mela irntha nambika avaluku saravanan mela illa.. Athuku reasonuhm avan than
 
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