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கவிதில்லையின் "எனக்கொரு காதலி இருக்கின்றாள்" - கருத்துத் திரி

Hanza

Hanza

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Super epi ka... Saro Maha phone conversation awesome👌👌👌👌
Maha konjam un pidivaathatha thalarthalaam...
Saro thappu pannavan. Unna naai madiri kevelema nadathunavan.. but avan adhukkum mela nalla life le adi vangittan enga vaayala nalla arai pattutan...
so konjam manasu erengi vaammaa... Of course inthe 4 years pirivu avangalukku kattayam theve pattichi... and now avangalukku idaila oru understanding and bond e create pannirukkum...
iniyaavathu avangalukkaga vaazhanum...
and Thani kudithanamaave irunga... Thappi thavari sari anthe family kula meendum kaal vechiratheenga... Ithan azhaga irukku... 👌👌👌❤❤❤

Hats off to you kavi ka. @kavitha
story e oru trend le kondu poreenga with mixed up emotions... Story slow a start panni accelerate aagi high peak la nindu now methu methuva climax a nokki decelerate aaguthu... Adhe madiri tan Ellarde emotions um.. soft a irunthu... Peak la aggressive aagi... Now calm a irukanga... 👌👌👌❤❤❤😍😍😍
 
kavitha

kavitha

எஸ்எம்எஸ் குழுமம் எழுத்தாளர்
Hanza Raheem Hakam said:
Super epi ka... Saro Maha phone conversation awesome👌👌👌👌
Maha konjam un pidivaathatha thalarthalaam...
Saro thappu pannavan. Unna naai madiri kevelema nadathunavan.. but avan adhukkum mela nalla life le adi vangittan enga vaayala nalla arai pattutan...
so konjam manasu erengi vaammaa... Of course inthe 4 years pirivu avangalukku kattayam theve pattichi... and now avangalukku idaila oru understanding and bond e create pannirukkum...
iniyaavathu avangalukkaga vaazhanum...
and Thani kudithanamaave irunga... Thappi thavari sari anthe family kula meendum kaal vechiratheenga... Ithan azhaga irukku... 👌👌👌❤❤❤

Hats off to you kavi ka. @kavitha
story e oru trend le kondu poreenga with mixed up emotions... Story slow a start panni accelerate aagi high peak la nindu now methu methuva climax a nokki decelerate aaguthu... Adhe madiri tan Ellarde emotions um.. soft a irunthu... Peak la aggressive aagi... Now calm a irukanga... 👌👌👌❤❤❤😍😍😍
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Thank you for ur lovely comment hanza, yes intha pirivu rendu perukume theva pattathu but ooruku ponathaan theriyum mahavoda mentality yeppadi irukkumnu. Yes endla yennala viruvirupa koduka mudila because aadiya aatam mudincha piragu thappa realise panra stage athu
 
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