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Abi Abi

Member
Very very nice UD writer ji :)
Saro maha kita pesrathu lam padikum pothu really feeling so good.. siddu sonathu siripa vanthuchu that mooka udaikta matter ha ha :-D
Maha manasu konjam marina pola theriyuthu
Saro ipo vachum maha arumai a purinchi kitane
Arumai Ana ud kavitha sis
Really story flow is good
Keep going
Waiting eagerly why saro was feeling happy after reading that letter
 

kavitha

எஸ்எம்எஸ் குழுமம் எழுத்தாளர்
Very very nice UD writer ji :)
Saro maha kita pesrathu lam padikum pothu really feeling so good.. siddu sonathu siripa vanthuchu that mooka udaikta matter ha ha :-D
Maha manasu konjam marina pola theriyuthu
Saro ipo vachum maha arumai a purinchi kitane
Arumai Ana ud kavitha sis
Really story flow is good
Keep going
Waiting eagerly why saro was feeling happy after reading that letter
Thank you sis, saro sidha kootitu vanthu sontha selavula soniyam vachukittan 😂. Maha manasu maaranaalum ava innum athula irunthu velila varala
 

kavitha

எஸ்எம்எஸ் குழுமம் எழுத்தாளர்
Hi kavi sis,
Oru mountain oda peak ah touch panitu oru vazhiya kizha vantha feel iruku sis na yen ethu solurena emotions oda high peak touch panitu ipo than stable ah ana situation nooki poitu iruku🤗🤗🤗 ethu kandipa ungalukuana paarati than kavi sis... Oru storya than padika aarambichen na mattum ila enga irukra neriya peru apadi than but nanga yelarum evangaloda yepo yepadi travel pana aarambichannu theriyama enga yellaraiyum entha story oda aiykyamagiteenga kavi sis 👏👏👏👏.
ore oru mistake arrivu yezhanthu seiyura seiyal vazhkaiya yenga kondu poi nipattum nu Saravanan oda life is big example 😟

ஒரு துளி கண்ணிரை துடைப்பது நட்பு இல்லை... மறு துளி வராமல் தடுப்பது தான் நட்பு... Yendru azhaga follow panuraru Pratheep 👌👌avarala mudinjatha panraru but saravanan life saravanan ninaicha mattum than Seri pana mudiyum 🤔

Maha ungaloda vetrigaramaga vazhkaiku neeyum unoda side la irunthu 1st step yeduthu vechita super ma but ethukum kandipa Pradeep Ku than thanks solanum 😍 accidentallya nadantha kooda pradeep nala ipo maha kita konja changes vanthu iruku ninaikren🧐

Saravanana purinjiktu maha thanoda aasaiya vitu kudukrathum... Maha kaga saravanan yerangi varathum👏👏👏good start for a successful married life 👍👍

Saravanan and Pradeep enaku onu mattum puriyave ila gowravam yenbathu yethu?? Unga veetla irukravanga ungala nambi vantha ponnu pathi thappa pesum bothu yenga poi irunthathu entha gowravam?? Thappana velai ya athathu yaaraiyum Yemathi pozhaikratha vida....yentha thozhilum gowramanathu than....

Maha, saravanan, pradeep, sid, chaaru and Maaya kutty nenga enum konja days than enga Iruka poreenganu ninaicha konjam ila rombave kashtama iruku😭😢 but eagerly waiting to c u all live happily ever after😍😍
Thank you sri for your lovely comment but innaiku thirukural missing😂. Padikira vayasula panna thappu thaan avan lifeye poratti pottuchu but atha thappunu innum namma thalaivar othukala. Pradheep kadavul kodutha varam , avan illanaa saro yennaiko sattaiyai kizhichukittu alainchirupan.
Mathavangalai yemaathaama paakira yentha veliyaa irunthaalum athu gowravam thaan but well settled family la irunthu vanthutu roadside la avan manaivi kadai potta avanuku asingama ninaikiraan, avangalum ungalai miss pannuvanga Sri
 

kavitha

எஸ்எம்எஸ் குழுமம் எழுத்தாளர்
செம்ம பதிவு கவிசிஸ் :love::love::love::love::love:
ரொம்ப கஷ்டமான பதிவுக்கு அப்புறம் மகிழ்ச்சியான பதிவு சூப்பர் 😘😘😘😘😘😘

Thank you sis 😍😍😍
 

Srisuri

Bronze Winner
Thank you sri for your lovely comment but innaiku thirukural missing😂. Padikira vayasula panna thappu thaan avan lifeye poratti pottuchu but atha thappunu innum namma thalaivar othukala. Pradheep kadavul kodutha varam , avan illanaa saro yennaiko sattaiyai kizhichukittu alainchirupan.
Mathavangalai yemaathaama paakira yentha veliyaa irunthaalum athu gowravam thaan but well settled family la irunthu vanthutu roadside la avan manaivi kadai potta avanuku asingama ninaikiraan, avangalum ungalai miss pannuvanga Sri
Sis avan pesinathu thappu than... But kovathula pesurathu yelam nama mind n heart la yeduthuka kudathunu maha purinjikanumnu na ninaikren sis... Yen, yethukunu aaraiyra gunam kandipa oru ponnu ku thevai nu nan ninaikren bcoz it wil make a women character bold and steady mind... Saravanan ku avan vai than periya yediri but ipo konjama konjama avana mathiktu irukaan.... Enaku yenamo rendu perum 5 years vazhnthutaanga but enum sariya purinjikala...
 

Srisuri

Bronze Winner
Thank you sri for your lovely comment but innaiku thirukural missing😂. Padikira vayasula panna thappu thaan avan lifeye poratti pottuchu but atha thappunu innum namma thalaivar othukala. Pradheep kadavul kodutha varam , avan illanaa saro yennaiko sattaiyai kizhichukittu alainchirupan.
Mathavangalai yemaathaama paakira yentha veliyaa irunthaalum athu gowravam thaan but well settled family la irunthu vanthutu roadside la avan manaivi kadai potta avanuku asingama ninaikiraan, avangalum ungalai miss pannuvanga Sri
Nethu na entha pakkam vanthathu nyt 11.50ku than sis... Today mrg time irukathu nu paathi thookathlaye Comment poten 🙈🙈 athu than kural missing sis 🤣🤣
 

Janujay

Bronze Winner
Sis avan pesinathu thappu than... But kovathula pesurathu yelam nama mind n heart la yeduthuka kudathunu maha purinjikanumnu na ninaikren sis... Yen, yethukunu aaraiyra gunam kandipa oru ponnu ku thevai nu nan ninaikren bcoz it wil make a women character bold and steady mind... Saravanan ku avan vai than periya yediri but ipo konjama konjama avana mathiktu irukaan.... Enaku yenamo rendu perum 5 years vazhnthutaanga but enum sariya purinjikala...
Kovathula pesharatha yeduthuka koodathu thaan aana yaar munaadi pesharathu onu iruku ilayaa. Mahaku ava mukiyama ila charu muyama kira poraatam manasukula vanthuduchu athuku thaguntha mathiri Saro kovathula varthaiyaala avala Charu munaadi vitukoduthu taan. Maha ena thaa charuva pathi therinju vanthaalum ava avan vazhkayila ila apadikirathaala thaa sarova pudichu kalyaanam panna. kannuku theriyaatha saro lifela oru ponnu iruntha vera avalaye kannuku munnadi kondu vanthu avan vaayalaye avan vazhntha life pathiyum avan manashula ava irukira idatha pathiyum entha ponnu yethukuva.
 
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RPG

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Kovathula pesharatha yeduthuka koodathu thaan aana yaar munaadi pesharathu onu iruku ilayaa. Mahaku ava mukiyama ila charu muyama kira poraatam manasukula vanthuduchu athuku thaguntha mathiri Saro kovathula varthaiyaala avala Charu munaadi vitukoduthu taan. Maha ena thaa charuva pathi therinju vanthaalum ava avan vazhkayila ila apadikirathaala thaa sarova pudichu kalyaanam panna. kannuku theriyaatha saro lifela oru ponnu iruntha vera avalaye kannuku munnadi kondu vanthu avan vaayalaye avan vazhntha life pathiyum avan manashula ava irukira idatha pathiyum entha ponnu yethukuva.
Dei muttaigose eduku da kaalailaye imbuttu peeling unaku
peeling ah kora......
peeling ah kora.....
 
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