revathi$ray
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hi sis!!! first indha story padikka start panna udane romba kobam vanthuchu,..epdi jishnu,chithrangatha names ellam use pannalamnu..adhu ennoda favorite storyla onnu,innoru authroda favourite hitsah neenga use panna koodathu,,.. my small suggestion...,maththa namesum enakku piduchu irukku,but sila scenes vera storyah niyabaga paduththu,athu ennanna mithrendra ,jithu samaathaana paduthura wordings,.....but kathai nallah irukkanaala itha lateah solren,..keepgoing,...story kondu porathu nallah irukku,but suspence kudukkrannu,romba unarvalai, nivalinnu confuse aagthu,continuation romba miss aaguthu,...story pidichathunaalathaan commentseh kuduthirukken,!!!!