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கவி சந்திராவின் - " ஆதி நீ அந்தம் நான் " - கருத்துத் திரி

PriyaPraveen

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Dev valkaila nadanthathu romba romba vedhanaya varuthama irukku...
preethi antha oru sooravali avanga kudumbathoda nimmathiya santhosatha alichuduchu...
Dev semmma superb mind apa antha sollnilaya kaila eduthavana ippa varai ella asapasam katti veachu gudumbatha thooki nirutha verioda ulaichathu romab romba arumai superb....Irunthalum avar appa balageenam ivan try pannathu enna solla no idea ana ellarkittayum unmaya irunthathu nice......Manju Abhinav avangaloda happyana life ipdi pathiyilea ponathu romba romba mosam...ithanala lalitha health issue 1 vayasu mithu ipdi ellaroda santhosatha antha oru nodi vidhi parichukittathu romba varuthama irukku...santhosam ivnaglukku nilaikkaatha thonuchu.....
Madhu kitta thannoda seyalgal tappu ellathayum solli ippa athukaka vim pottu vilakittu irukkan good will certificate vendi.,...ine madhu enna solluvaloa....Dev Appa enna aanar...
 

Storyreader

Well-known member
Lovely update. The long waited one. As you told earlier you have given the reason for Vikram's behaviour . In addition it's also mentioned that he has not done adultery and is true to Madhu after feeling his love for her. That's really good about him. Still such a shrewd, multi-talented, bold and courageous person losing his confidence in practising discipline at all circumstances is somewhat hindering though the concept adds substance to the story. He could have been wise enough to take his paternal grandfather as his role model instead of his dad. As per the story his grandfather is also a successful business man who has been true to his wife. Moreover his mother's ill-health is also a reason for his dad's behaviour, though not justified. It need not be the same with his spouse, if at all he got married.
Now Madhu being an innocent and culture bound women who respects her husband has no other option left behind but to forgive him, because their love for each other is true. Her gratitude towards Vikram will also make her to think in that way. One beautiful aspect that I liked is inspite of all these feelings Madhu's justified possessiveness overcomes and makes her feel sad for her husband's behaviour.
Somehow a man's indiscipline bound activities are justified in the name of love and a disciplined woman has no other option left behind but to accept him whole heartedly because she finds happiness only in the one to one marital relationship.
My views are only about the thought conveyed through the story. Above all the scenes described and the conversations between the lead compells me to read the story ignoring the hindrances.
 

Nithya Lakshmi

Well-known member
Very emotional epi sis anna comment pandrathey thariyala 😭😭😭😭😭feeling sad 😔 😔 dev happy irukanum apadi two epis thanga sis chinna vayathu iruthu thanimai ilay irunthutan family gaga sonalum he's feeling lonely masha voda avan happy irukanum
 

Kavi chandra

எஸ்எம்எஸ் குழுமம் எழுத்தாளர்
Ippidi one-rendu hint unga vayilirundhu vandhathaane naanga story movement and characters-oda behaviour-kaana motive-ai guess Panna mudiyum . Adhukku dhaan appidi sonnen. So I can expect a good reason behind Vikram's behaviour.
Nice trick
 

Kavi chandra

எஸ்எம்எஸ் குழுமம் எழுத்தாளர்
Anan கதையை இப்ப தான் வாசித்தேன். wow fantastic story. விக்கிரம் super ஆரம்பத்தில் இருந்தே எனக்கு அவனின் character பிடித்திருந்தது.
நன்றி மா
 
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