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கவிதில்லையின் "எனக்கொரு காதலி இருக்கின்றாள்" - கருத்துத் திரி

kavitha

எஸ்எம்எஸ் குழுமம் எழுத்தாளர்
இது வரைக்கும் மஹாவை வெறும் ஏழை ன்னு insult பண்ணான் ஆனா இப்ப அவள கேவலமான வார்த்தையால sonnadum pongitta.... அது தான் வித்யாசம்.... எத வேணா பொறுக்க முடியும் ஆனா ஒரு நல்ல பெண்ணால் இந்த பேச்ச கேட்க முடியாது.... பொருமை இழந்துட்டா

Ava over stressla irukka atha theriyama innum avalai seendikitte irukkan burst aana avanai mattum illa familye pathikumnu yosikala
 

kavitha

எஸ்எம்எஸ் குழுமம் எழுத்தாளர்
Crct than sis.. Chinna vayasulaye amma padta kashtatha paathu valarra pasanga, entha ponnum kashtapadakoodathunum nenapanga.. Kashtapaduthavum maatanga.. Intha saravanan than thimirlaye oori poi valanthutkane🤦‍♀️🤷‍♀️

😍😍👍
 

RPG

Bronze Winner
kavi yepdiyavathu en thala ya maha kitta irundu kapathunga maha alavuku avar strong illa pinchu nenjam inimel maha panaporada ellam thangadu pls pls pls onu panunga thalaya maha kitta full surrender aga sollidunga maha pls ma etho ariya pulla theriyama varthaya vituduchi manichu nee periya manushi agidu onu marandudatha anda varthaya anda nerathula needan first sonna hw dare u to say this to another woman being a woman do u know anything abt charu her character nature no nothing except that she is the ex of ur husband anda oru thagudi poduma avala nee anda vaarthai solla so appo ellaroda ex yum ipdi dan nenapiya neeya avana yen charuva kootitu vandanu kekka mata reason explain vanda charuvayum eduvum pesa vida matta but easy a anda vaarthaya avala paathu keppa apadidana epavum vaarthayila nidanam venum saro pesunadu unoda actionukana reaction dan avana ada start panala avana una anda varthaya first pesala mind that unaku epadi valikudo ade maathiridan avalukum valikum yen unavida adigamave valikum
 

kavitha

எஸ்எம்எஸ் குழுமம் எழுத்தாளர்
its just my opinion. Many told that maha would have taken initiative to sort out the prob. Its crct but her nature didnt allow her to take bold steps.
Once after getting insulted from co-sisters, she thought to stand brave and ready to talk with saro that day she was trying to talk but because of saro anger she didnt, then she thought to not to go her room but saro behaved very badly and asked her to go out of home. she didnt get any support from her parents or from in-laws except her father-in-law. oru sarasari ponnu mana nilai than maha. so she started to be silent. but ipo saro use pana bad word nala maha ku antha porumai oda saturation point ku vanthu reacting opposite to her character. ithu romba iyalpana velipadu average woman oda reaction ipdi than irkum. writer itha romba nalla kondu vantrukinga. really a good common family story. keep going writer! all the best wishes.
this is my first stry of urs. inime unga stories elam padikanum nu thonuthu

Thank you very much for your comments sis, yes ithu normala family nadakira storythaan hero avalavu nallavan kidayathu sarasari manusan avanukum kobam failure irukku atha avan kaatura ore idam wife pala family ipoadithaan situation irukku. This is my second story sis.
 

NithyaKumaravel

Active member
சரோ மாதிரி ஆளுங்க இருக்காங்க தான். சரோ வ வைச்சி செஞ்சா அவங்க எல்லாரையும் வைச்சி செஞ்ச feel கிடைக்கும் இல்ல. :unsure::unsure::unsure::unsure:;)
 

kavitha

எஸ்எம்எஸ் குழுமம் எழுத்தாளர்
kavi yepdiyavathu en thala ya maha kitta irundu kapathunga maha alavuku avar strong illa pinchu nenjam inimel maha panaporada ellam thangadu pls pls pls onu panunga thalaya maha kitta full surrender aga sollidunga maha pls ma etho ariya pulla theriyama varthaya vituduchi manichu nee periya manushi agidu onu marandudatha anda varthaya anda nerathula needan first sonna hw dare u to say this to another woman being a woman do u know anything abt charu her character nature no nothing except that she is the ex of ur husband anda oru thagudi poduma avala nee anda vaarthai solla so appo ellaroda ex yum ipdi dan nenapiya neeya avana yen charuva kootitu vandanu kekka mata reason explain vanda charuvayum eduvum pesa vida matta but easy a anda vaarthaya avala paathu keppa apadidana epavum vaarthayila nidanam venum saro pesunadu unoda actionukana reaction dan avana ada start panala avana una anda varthaya first pesala mind that unaku epadi valikudo ade maathiridan avalukum valikum yen unavida adigamave valikum
Haha naan eni vaaiyai thiraka maaten saro visayathula, but neenga sonnathu polathaan maha more stronger than saro enithaan athu varum, saroku yezharai start aagiduchu eni avan lifela pada koodaathai pada poraan
 

kavitha

எஸ்எம்எஸ் குழுமம் எழுத்தாளர்
சரோ மாதிரி ஆளுங்க இருக்காங்க தான். சரோ வ வைச்சி செஞ்சா அவங்க எல்லாரையும் வைச்சி செஞ்ச feel கிடைக்கும் இல்ல. :unsure::unsure::unsure::unsure:;)

Sarovai vachi seiyalam but reala appadi nadaka chances kammi aadi adankiya pin ஞானுதயம் வரும்🤣
 

RPG

Bronze Winner
its just my opinion. Many told that maha would have taken initiative to sort out the prob. Its crct but her nature didnt allow her to take bold steps.
Once after getting insulted from co-sisters, she thought to stand brave and ready to talk with saro that day she was trying to talk but because of saro anger she didnt, then she thought to not to go her room but saro behaved very badly and asked her to go out of home. she didnt get any support from her parents or from in-laws except her father-in-law. oru sarasari ponnu mana nilai than maha. so she started to be silent. but ipo saro use pana bad word nala maha ku antha porumai oda saturation point ku vanthu reacting opposite to her character. ithu romba iyalpana velipadu average woman oda reaction ipdi than irkum. writer itha romba nalla kondu vantrukinga. really a good common family story. keep going writer! all the best wishes.
this is my first stry of urs. inime unga stories elam padikanum nu thonuthu
hi dear i totally agree with ur view but still saro onnum kalyanam anadum mahava thooki thalayila vechi kondadala yen normal wife ku koduka vendiya yenda urimayum kodukala so angaye avanoda character puriyudu ava manasalavula evlo padikapattirukanu i can understand but ide co sisters ethirla thanoda mariyadaya kapathika avaluku theriyalaye avanga mundadi respectful ana life ava vazhanumna saro kita pesi irukanum situations handle panni irukanum though she is illiterate poor atleast she should have think innum evlo naalaiku nama ide madiri iruka poromnu 5 yrs ku apurama pesa nenacha kovama irunda ok but saro pathi terinjava ena pani irukanum room ku poi pesi irukanum adamant a irundu irukanum but kitchen la vechi panumbodu family vandu nikkumnra common sense kuda illayaa avaluku ida solrada nala na saro nalavanu justify panala im just trying to say that there is two sides for a coin neenga ellam oru side matum pakadinga
 
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