Hi mam,
Ur first story is awesome... good try.. a business tycoon expressing his love in love telecast is awesome...I am having more doubts in this story..please clear me..
1.what happened to jilmil brother..he didn't come in the story
2.jokki first sight is jilmil only suddenly how he proposed to pinnoda
3.who is daughter of akilandeshwari,u said only about his son
4.how Sherya and yakish statred their love.
5.how jilmil died and what type of disease she is suffering.we have to assume by the story only not given In clear way.
6. U didn't explain the situation how dhruva proposed his love with jilmil .
7.jokki,yakshith and rayansh are friends what happened to rayansh..
8.how he came to know jilmil and he saved girl are one..
Having lot of doubts pa.may be I didn't understand the story also..so clear my doubts pa..