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[Madhu Malar]

Hi malar akka.... Innaiku ud pramaatham... Atha Vida neenga ellarukum nantri sonna vitham atha vida pramaatham... Nan kadantha 1yr ku mela oru silent reader ah than irunthen..nan srikala mam oda novel padika than intha thalathula kuthichen... Aana Nan 1st paducha kathaiye Unga novel nilave ennidam nerunkathey than... Enna solla appove nan unga ezhuthu mela mayangi vilunthuten.. Appo enaku thonum namma avangaluku comment pannalamenu... Apram sari irukattum next story la comment pannalanu... Thagikkum kulire kulirkayava intha novel pppaaahh chance eh illa. Oru action kalantha romantic novel ipdi yaaru eluthunathe illapa... Apram kollamal kontru kuvithene mannipaaya Semma novel..Intha than srikala mam silent reader kalukku aapu vaitharkal... Udane Nan intha kudumbathula member aagitena pathukongale. aana seekiram kathai mudunchutathenu nenacha alugachi varuthu.. Irukattum adutha novel oda neenga engala meet pannanum koodiya seekirame... Ok va... Apram pls epilog podunga. Illaina unga kanavula mappilai mokkasaamy varuvan pa...

 

[rajinrm]

hai malar, super O super. arumai. kadhaiyum athen karuthm athil ungaludaiya azhagana ezhuthukalin , sorkalin nayam arumaiya iruinthathu. god bless you. thank you. waiting for your another super story. please rerun your previous story. thank you. with regards from rajinrm

 

[Ayshs]

super end iruvarum avarhalukku niyayam seithu vi ttarhal ungalin aduttha kadaiyai eppodu?waitingcome soon ok?

 

[Madhu Malar]

Rendu perum serthutanga.. ippo avanga rendu perum nimmathiya thoogitu irukanga... Sssss....saththam podathinga friends avanga thookatha kedukama neenga ellarum sernthu Nan avangalukaga dedicate Panna intha song ah saththam illama paaditu ponga...
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பெண்: எனதுயிரே.. எனதுயிரே..
எனக்கெனவே நீ கிடைத்தாய்..
எனதுறவே எனதுறவே
கடவுளைப் போல் நீ முளைத்தாய்
நெடுஞ்சாலையில் படும் பாதம் போல்
சேர்கிறேன் வாழும் காலமே
வரும் நாட்களே, தரும் பூக்களே
நீளுமே, காதல் காதல் வாசமே....
எனதுயிரே எனதுயிரே...
எனக்கெனவே நீ கிடைத்தாய்...
எனதுறவே எனதுறவே
கடவுளைப் போல் நீ முளைத்தாய்

(இசை...)

ஆண்: இனி இரவே இல்லை கண்டேன், உன்
விழிகளில் கிழக்கு திசை..
இனி பிரிவே இல்லை அன்பே, உன்
உளறலும் எனக்கு இசை

பெண்: உன்னை காணும் வரையில், எந்தன்
வாழ்க்கை வெள்ளை காகிதம்..
கண்ணால் நீயும் அதிலே
எழுதி போனால் நல்ல ஓவியம்..
சிறு பறவையில், ஒரு வார்த்தையில்
தோன்றுதே நூறு கோடி வானவில்... (எனதுயிரே...)

பெண்: ஆ... ஆ.... லா....
லலலலலா...... லலலலலா...... லலலலலா...... லலலலலா......
(இசை...)

பெண்: மரம் இருந்தால் அங்கே
என்னை நான் நிழலென விரித்திடுவேன்..
இலை விழுந்தால் ஐய்யோ
என்றே நான் இருதயம் துடித்திடுவேன்..

ஆண்: இனி மேல் நமது இதழ்கள்
இணைந்து சிரிக்கும் ஓசை கேட்குமே
நெடுநாள் நிலவும் நிலவின்
களங்கம் துடைக்க கைகள் கோர்க்குமே
உருவாக்கினாய் அதிகாலையை
வாழ்கவே நீயும் வாழ்வின் மோட்சமே

பெண்: எனதுயிரே எனதுயிரே...
எனக்கெனவே நீ கிடைத்தாய்...
எனதுறவே எனதுறவே
கடவுளைப் போல் நீ முளைத்தாய்

ஆண்: நெடுஞ்சாலையில் படும் பாதம் போல்
சேர்கிறேன் வாழும் காலமே
வரும் நாட்களே கரும் பூக்களே
நீளுமே காதல் காதல் வாசமே

பெண்: ம்ம்ம்......
Nalam vaazha vazhththum anbu madhu...

 

[Naliniraja22]

Akkachi ada ada enaikku varithiya varala eppadi sollurathuinnu theriyama irrukken ora strech etho nalaikku exam ikku padikura Mari mudichen innaikku Sunday inga innaikku no samyal only abayan and milur than vituilla athuvum last episode chanceya illa unnaruvupurvamana story manusu full ya abayan and milur than story oda thakkam innum konjam nalaikku irrukkom ....really a multi talented person akkachi ninga ungaloda expression description pathu appadiya oranju poi irrukken love u ma ...innum neraiya story eluthanum ninga ...muduincha abayan happy moments ya kuduinga athuvum pathudurom

 

[saru25]

Romba arumaiyana ending... ungaloda mudhal kadhiyil irundhu ungaloda payanichu iruken....oovoru kadhaiyum vithyasamanathu... anabayanuku apparam romba pidichathu vidhulan than... aana anabayana vida vidhulan romba expressive... "To reach a reader's heart, you must get to the heart of your story", neenga adha correcta kondu poi irukeenga... he reached the readers heart..... The most problem for a writer is to create a FAN base, but you NAILED IT!!!... 6K comments for a single story is unimaginable... U have attained that height... u have created connection between character emotion and readers empathy (ungala rendu piriva pirinji kudumi pidi sandai mattum than podala, matha padi varathaiyala nerayave sandaya poda vachiteenga) yes, this is all because you evoked the readers Emotion (to me this is one of the most important character that a writer should possess for a long run of success)... u have that... U made us staying up late, eagerly waiting for your next episodes and mainly Oversleeping the next day ...
We can infer what's happening to the characters... everything seems to be happening just in front of us... all the characters emotions are seen through their body language, thoughts and dialogues... you are one of the writers I inspire a lot... Especially your "master over Tamil Language".. the character names you choose are outstanding... I was searching the web to see if there is a name "Abayavidhulan" anywhere in the world... the search showed only your story "Vijayamalar-in Kollamal Kondru Pudaithene Mannipaya"... ( I was so attracted towards your love for the language and hence I was asking your help to get the baby name for my Bro's baby)....
Ennaku anti heroes kadaikal romba pidukkum... naan romba virumbi padicha ore novelist "Ramani" amma than...adhukaparam oru sila ezhuthalargalthu padichiruken.... aana Ramani ammava pola innum yaarudhum enoda heartuku close agala ( may be 'coz am not a good reader) ..avangaloda anti hero kadaigal naan romba virumbi padipen... adhula romba pidichathu "Mayangukiral Oru Madhu" (idhu oru silarukku pidikamal pogalam)... adhuku appuram ungaloda indha story than romba pidichathu....
Naan neraiya comments poda maten... padichi mudichathukaparam than comment poduven... aana idha storyla appo appo vandhu thalaya katuven... ennaku edhu correctunu padutho adha solli irupen... I wanted to be neutral... abayan pakkam niyayam irundha avan pakkam solli irupen, mridhu pakkam irudhal avala pathi solli irupen...sorry if I've hurt you knowingly or unknowingly through my comments ...
I was totally amazed to see readers comments , their different perspectives on each and every character... since I was totally new to reading especially tamil novels, ennaku ippadi ellam irukumanu oru arvathai unndu panni irukkenga neengalum , unga ezhuthu moolama kidaitha readersum.... all are talented in either of the way being it giving critics or praising it in the form of kavithaigal... all have the potential to become a novelists or lyricist one day...
last but not the least, hope u mite have remember that I told in one of comments in Theeran's novel - You have every potential to write a script for a movie... So please try... All the best for your future endeavors Nayani ma !!! See you soon...

PS: sorry for the long post ...

 

[Storyreader]

Nayani Ma'am! Very pleasant and practical ending to the story. Abhayan-oda feelings, expressions and behaviour- I mean his body language through your words are all excellent. Aval Akka sonna vishayatha kettutu appuram vandhanu Kovam romba azhagu.

Kadavu settu-na visa or passport.? Enakku adhu mattum puriyala.

Suvatril aani adikiradhula oru style vechu neenga ezhudhinadhu enakku romba pidichidhu.

"His love towards her is capable of controlling his lust but still it's difficult" - Indha message romba azhagu. - Indha dhandanai avanukku avaloda absence-la easy-aaga irundhirukum, but aval presence with affection engira soozhnilaiyil avanukku perutha sodhanai. Ippidi silent-aa last update-layum avanukku punishment koduthu ungalukkula irukura needhipathi-ya satisfy panniteenga-nu nenaikiren.

Oru marakka mudhiyadha story koduthathukku I owe a lot of thanks to you.

 

[Indumathi purushothaman]

Mam abayan milir rendu perum thumbavum twins pirandu santhosama urrundhanga epilog podunga pa

 

[SarojaGopalakrishnan]

அருமையான பதிவு

 

[Lakshmi perumal]

உயிரோட்டமுள்ள அருமையான கதை.