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VRao

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Unmailaye naa first nithilakkuthan support senjittu irundhen partner silapala vivathathukku piragu authourkitta naa sonnen yaarachum oru reader flashback varadhukku munnadi aadhi nalla paiyan apdinu sollitta naa aadhi side varenu challenge senjen adhuvaraikkum naanum aadhiya kaluvi kayavachittuthan irundhen annaikku ennoda neram sari illanu nenakiren next day Rajeeya sis vandhu aadhi nallavanganu post pottutu oditanga 😔 enakku heart attack mattumthan varala irundhalum enna seiradhu sonna varthai marakoodathenu aadhiya pugazhndhu(🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮)pesittu irukken adhoda vittangalanu ketingana adhuthan illa authour aadhiya enakku mamavakkittanga na no no sonnen aprom ipdiye poitrundhuchu oru naal naa aadhiya thambiya adobt senjikittenu sonnen appavum vidale bhagavanee ennaya mannichidunu saamiya vendikittu manasa kallakkittu yes I'm aadhi's lover aadhi mama thanu posterla announce senjitten aana naa indirecta aadhi thappunu sollittuthan iruken and adhepola nithila melayum thappu irukku

Naan eppavume thavarugalai aadharikirava illa adhuthan ennoda nija character school and college la naa rombave rough and tuff veetila mattumthan jolly person and ippo ingeyum

Enakku theriyum aadhi mathiriyana aalungalukku support senji pesuradhu romba thappunu csp la naa aadhikaga podura comments anga idha padikira maththa readerskitta iva enna maathiriyana ponnunu oru bad thought avanga manasula vara vaikka kandippa vaippirukku irundhalum naan seiren and idhu ennaporuthavaraikkum just oru karpanai kadhai idha vachi yaarachum ennoda character idhuthanu fix senja naa onnum panna mudiyadhu ennapathi en family and my friends ivangalukku therincha podhumnu naa nenachithan indha risk eduthen
And also endha story padichalum adhula enakku prayojanama edhachum vishayam irundha adha naa follow pannuven aadhiyin nila la oru ponna 17 yrs varaikkum kuzhandhai mathiriye nenachi nadathuna avanga indha mathiri problems face pannumpodhu adha epdi yethirkollanumnu therinchikalame poiduvanga aprom aadhi mathiriyana mosakaranga kaila sikki kastapaduvanga so naa nilava parthu ennoda pasangala eppadi valarkakoodathunu therinchikitten i mean kuzhanthaithanama

Naa sonnathula sollapora vishayam edha irundhalum adhula edhachum thavaru irundha enakku suttikattunga partner adhu enakku uthaviya irukkum and neenga ennaya tharalama thittalam

ivlo serious satya vendaame enakku poo voda bujji sathya thaan venum ... nee sanda poduvennu nenecha senti aayita ... evlo periya post uh daa ...

truly naan unna thappa endha char judgement uhm pass pannala .... naan unna oru fun filled person ah thaan paarkiren ... indha arguments ellam oru fun avlo thaan .... thittuvennu sonndellam nee choc,ice cream sonnadhala chumma sonnadhu ...

i'm truly happy to learn u take positive things even in these stories ... correct ... pon kuzhandaingala romba strong ah bring up pannanum ... indha negative characters oda positive side paarkirennu solrathellaam thaan enakku pidikala ... oru mother ah romba strong ah namba irukanum ... sila samayam close circles laye ipdi problems varum ..romba alert ah irukanum ... again indha storila writer kadasila andha kevalamaanavana kalyanam panra madiri ezhuduvaangannu thaan erichal varudhu ... naan inime andha story padipennaanu kooda theriyala ... vidu i'm happy un side clear pannadhukku ...
 

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ivlo serious satya vendaame enakku poo voda bujji sathya thaan venum ... nee sanda poduvennu nenecha senti aayita ... evlo periya post uh daa ...

truly naan unna thappa endha char judgement uhm pass pannala .... naan unna oru fun filled person ah thaan paarkiren ... indha arguments ellam oru fun avlo thaan .... thittuvennu sonndellam nee choc,ice cream sonnadhala chumma sonnadhu ...

i'm truly happy to learn u take positive things even in these stories ... correct ... pon kuzhandaingala romba strong ah bring up pannanum ... indha negative characters oda positive side paarkirennu solrathellaam thaan enakku pidikala ... oru mother ah romba strong ah namba irukanum ... sila samayam close circles laye ipdi problems varum ..romba alert ah irukanum ... again indha storila writer kadasila andha kevalamaanavana kalyanam panra madiri ezhuduvaangannu thaan erichal varudhu ... naan inime andha story padipennaanu kooda theriyala ... vidu i'm happy un side clear pannadhukku ...
Indha aadhikke ipdina vk nu oru lawyer innaikku senja kaariyam ungalukku therincha avlothan naa adha padichittu therichi odi vandhutten
 

VRao

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Very soriii hod. . Actually Aadhi seiyarathu 200 percent thappu than ... but yetho reason irukunu en manasuku thonuthu... antha story Author avangaluku romance scene veikattuma nu ketanga.. but atha first na than vendam nu sonnen becoz enaku pen kozhanthai iruku...but ithu oru lesson... society la nadakara oru vishayam than ivanga atha exaggerate panni sollala...
Na 2 nd delivery ku ponapa anga 15 yrs school ponnu vantha abort pandrathuku... but antha ponnuku konjam kuda antha payam illa... keta avan enaku niraya gifts vangi thanthanu sonna. But ennaku shock agiduchu... so na ithula nilla va than na thappu solluven... sorry officer☹☹☹

ellaam correct aana yetho reason thappu ... endha reasonukkum oru chinna ponnukitta nadanthukira murai irukku .. thoongum bodhu ... ennala mela padikaave mudiyala
 

VRao

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andha story padikanumda ... konjam padichen ... enakku forum vittu poidalaamnu feel aaguthu ... neraya stories revengennu violence ivlo ezhudaraanga ... padikave mudiyala ... nijama men ivlo mosamilla ..ivanga over ah exaggerate panraaanga revengunnu ... apparam andha ponnunga avangala mrg panra madiri happy ending .. female ivlo weak illa ... podannu povaangale thavira ipdi patta chars kooda vaazha maataanga ...
 
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