Hi Chellam,Hey ja ja ...
Is this your first story....really cant believe...it was very very gud...smooth and strong flow of story...laughed a lot for the combination of words with animals while scolding him with her mind voice
I don't have any flaws in your story..it was really amazing
Comment potten so Enkuda palam vidunga...kathie Corana ellam anupathinga
S it is my first story...Believe...Thank you that u liked the story....mind voice which made me also laugh...Thank you for ur comments...silent reader neenga site la comment poda vanthuteengale..athukke kodi thanks...athanaala palam unga kooda...kathi n corona ellam anuppala chello...thank you